Comments received on poems by tadpole
DEATH OF A DIVA
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Great poem! Sounds like someone who favored riches in her lifetime rather than family or love. Tragic but very well written!--Christina
January 22nd, 2017 12:45
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Great poem! Sounds like someone who favored riches in her lifetime rather than family or love. Tragic but very well written!--Christina
January 22nd, 2017 12:45
DEATH OF A DIVA
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like holly wood to me,oh but i guess the hired help reminds them of how great they used to be..
January 22nd, 2017 11:39
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like holly wood to me,oh but i guess the hired help reminds them of how great they used to be..
January 22nd, 2017 11:39
DEATH OF A DIVA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TADPOLE ~ Thanks for your first poem. It is elegant in its structure replete with rhyme (great rhyming pattern (xabba etc) and rhythm ~ great to recite. The subject however is sad but very true ~ I have met some DIVAS ! The morale of your poem must be \"Do unto others ~ as you would be done by\". Thanks for sharing Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
January 22nd, 2017 11:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TADPOLE ~ Thanks for your first poem. It is elegant in its structure replete with rhyme (great rhyming pattern (xabba etc) and rhythm ~ great to recite. The subject however is sad but very true ~ I have met some DIVAS ! The morale of your poem must be \"Do unto others ~ as you would be done by\". Thanks for sharing Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
January 22nd, 2017 11:13
