Comments received on poems by Michelle Syd
Day By Day With Chronic Pain
dusk arising said:
There are times this life brings us the anguish of pain, be it mental or physical. And the first thing we instinctively do is to decide whether or not we succumb or succeed.
Your piece reads like you are a survivor and prepared to endure the fight to the other side where once again joy waits.
Not just a glib and posey, pretty comment from me today Michelle. I am fighting the dreaded C at the moment know that the positive attitude to overcome, to succeed is what keeps me afloat.
Go for it and win!
October 1st, 2019 15:23
dusk arising said:
There are times this life brings us the anguish of pain, be it mental or physical. And the first thing we instinctively do is to decide whether or not we succumb or succeed.
Your piece reads like you are a survivor and prepared to endure the fight to the other side where once again joy waits.
Not just a glib and posey, pretty comment from me today Michelle. I am fighting the dreaded C at the moment know that the positive attitude to overcome, to succeed is what keeps me afloat.
Go for it and win!
October 1st, 2019 15:23
Day By Day With Chronic Pain
chani said:
It\'s a nice poem Michelle. What ever it is, don\'t give it up. Give a good fight.
We all are having just black and white days, not colourful as we expect. But face it with courage. You will be fine in no time.
Keep writing. You will find a way out easily
October 1st, 2019 13:35
chani said:
It\'s a nice poem Michelle. What ever it is, don\'t give it up. Give a good fight.
We all are having just black and white days, not colourful as we expect. But face it with courage. You will be fine in no time.
Keep writing. You will find a way out easily
October 1st, 2019 13:35
Just Like That
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MICHELLE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ straight from your broken heart. Being a TEEN and growing up in the 21st C is not easy and falling in (and out) of Love is often the hardest part. Personally (I work with 16 ~ 25\'s in a Vocational College) I think it\'s harder for Girls than Boys because God wired you more sensitively ! I like you attitude about NOT taking emotional abuse ~ which is the right advice as a \"Potential Counselor\" Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2017 06:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MICHELLE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ straight from your broken heart. Being a TEEN and growing up in the 21st C is not easy and falling in (and out) of Love is often the hardest part. Personally (I work with 16 ~ 25\'s in a Vocational College) I think it\'s harder for Girls than Boys because God wired you more sensitively ! I like you attitude about NOT taking emotional abuse ~ which is the right advice as a \"Potential Counselor\" Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2017 06:40
Just Like That
Terry dailey said:
Great poem. It brought me into the words as if i was reading a note laying by a missing pillow. To take the readers to such a place is art. You consider an artist...
January 17th, 2017 01:19
Terry dailey said:
Great poem. It brought me into the words as if i was reading a note laying by a missing pillow. To take the readers to such a place is art. You consider an artist...
January 17th, 2017 01:19
