Comments received on poems by Mel1349
Longing To Be Unmasked
Michael Edwards said:
Not the sort of subject matter that usually appeals to me yet this one really held my attention - a super write,
January 20th, 2017 01:07
Michael Edwards said:
Not the sort of subject matter that usually appeals to me yet this one really held my attention - a super write,
January 20th, 2017 01:07
Longing To Be Unmasked
Shakerite said:
Take off that mask and unearth the beauty within.
January 19th, 2017 22:46
Shakerite said:
Take off that mask and unearth the beauty within.
January 19th, 2017 22:46
Moonlight
Wilting moon said:
This is just beautiful. I have always loved the way a moob is seen and interpreted by other, but this out does them all. Everything about it was calm and inspiring. Such a beautiful and stunning write.
January 19th, 2017 06:15
Wilting moon said:
This is just beautiful. I have always loved the way a moob is seen and interpreted by other, but this out does them all. Everything about it was calm and inspiring. Such a beautiful and stunning write.
January 19th, 2017 06:15
Moonlight
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the comparison of sunlight to moonlight in this tender verse - - an appealing read.
January 19th, 2017 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the comparison of sunlight to moonlight in this tender verse - - an appealing read.
January 19th, 2017 04:06
Moonlight
Clark said:
This is so beautiful, honest, and pure. Amazing message. Moonlight is always there as love should be. Really enjoyed reading this!
January 18th, 2017 22:26
Clark said:
This is so beautiful, honest, and pure. Amazing message. Moonlight is always there as love should be. Really enjoyed reading this!
January 18th, 2017 22:26
Moonlight
Jarid said:
Such a great poem! I\'ve never thought of the moon this way. Interesting piece with such wisdom. Superb!
January 18th, 2017 20:15
Jarid said:
Such a great poem! I\'ve never thought of the moon this way. Interesting piece with such wisdom. Superb!
January 18th, 2017 20:15
Moonlight
NB said:
this is inspiring.. the moon will always be there.. I really love the idea, brilliantly done!
January 18th, 2017 20:04
NB said:
this is inspiring.. the moon will always be there.. I really love the idea, brilliantly done!
January 18th, 2017 20:04
This Kiss
Alex Arnot said:
A lot of power behind this one and I like how it all revolves around a single moment!
January 16th, 2017 22:09
Alex Arnot said:
A lot of power behind this one and I like how it all revolves around a single moment!
January 16th, 2017 22:09
This Kiss
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEL ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem which poses a challenge about the categories of kisses of which there are many ! I is a well written free verse poem ~ with lots iof rhythm and flow as suits the subject. We all kiss every day but THIS KISS was not normal or soft and delicate ~ it was a paradox ! Alluring yet dangerous ~ offering pain and relief ~ wrong but beckoning ~ hated not love ~ unforgettable but bad ................ ? I guess if we are honest MEL we have all received (and given) kisses of the genre you describe and they are very very captivating. What you do about it ~ only you can decide ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 16th, 2017 19:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEL ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem which poses a challenge about the categories of kisses of which there are many ! I is a well written free verse poem ~ with lots iof rhythm and flow as suits the subject. We all kiss every day but THIS KISS was not normal or soft and delicate ~ it was a paradox ! Alluring yet dangerous ~ offering pain and relief ~ wrong but beckoning ~ hated not love ~ unforgettable but bad ................ ? I guess if we are honest MEL we have all received (and given) kisses of the genre you describe and they are very very captivating. What you do about it ~ only you can decide ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 16th, 2017 19:36
