Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Does It Matter?
Poetic Licence said:
To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done
May 9th, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done
May 9th, 2025 10:42
Does It Matter?
sorenbarrett said:
They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend
May 9th, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend
May 9th, 2025 09:58
Does It Matter?
arqios said:
It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 09:33
arqios said:
It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 09:33
Betrayal
arqios said:
Looking at getting tone on paper… probably the toughest of these traitors. Subtle betrayals… breathe even makes the mark. A sure assassin. 🙏🏻🕊
May 8th, 2025 15:55
arqios said:
Looking at getting tone on paper… probably the toughest of these traitors. Subtle betrayals… breathe even makes the mark. A sure assassin. 🙏🏻🕊
May 8th, 2025 15:55
Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write a sense of the double edged sword, and maybe some betrayal in the write, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:08
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write a sense of the double edged sword, and maybe some betrayal in the write, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:08
Betrayal
orchidee said:
Were we betrayed by Obi or Popeye, or both? And - don\'t I think of anyone else besides those two? LOL.
May 8th, 2025 10:29
orchidee said:
Were we betrayed by Obi or Popeye, or both? And - don\'t I think of anyone else besides those two? LOL.
May 8th, 2025 10:29
Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
So few words that also betray. Words are not always needed to betray one. A wonderful poetic write
May 8th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
So few words that also betray. Words are not always needed to betray one. A wonderful poetic write
May 8th, 2025 09:59
Betrayal
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, but of course! And I\'d have it no other way. I\'m happy to be me. This gorgeous itty bitty pretty number packs a punch in tantalizing brevity. Superb. Thank you for sharing. I love it. Excellently rendered with a piercing poignancy and sparse imagery.
May 8th, 2025 09:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, but of course! And I\'d have it no other way. I\'m happy to be me. This gorgeous itty bitty pretty number packs a punch in tantalizing brevity. Superb. Thank you for sharing. I love it. Excellently rendered with a piercing poignancy and sparse imagery.
May 8th, 2025 09:50
Don\'t Let It Own You
Damaso said:
Friend, I can feel the blood rushing as I read each line, and my heart fills with courage enough to take down an army single-handedly. Heroic. Greetings.
May 8th, 2025 09:00
Damaso said:
Friend, I can feel the blood rushing as I read each line, and my heart fills with courage enough to take down an army single-handedly. Heroic. Greetings.
May 8th, 2025 09:00
Don\'t Let It Own You
arqios said:
Being “owned” had quite a strong meaning in Gen Y and such. “Pwned” in gamer parlance. When we rise above we have a sense of not being owned or whatever the term is these days🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2025 00:59
arqios said:
Being “owned” had quite a strong meaning in Gen Y and such. “Pwned” in gamer parlance. When we rise above we have a sense of not being owned or whatever the term is these days🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2025 00:59
Don\'t Let It Own You
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, \"... hath no fury like a woman scorned.\" Wasn\'t it? Concluding on that note, manhood seems to beautifully assert itself. Fascinating. This is a very pretty number in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a ringing, provocative poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, \"... hath no fury like a woman scorned.\" Wasn\'t it? Concluding on that note, manhood seems to beautifully assert itself. Fascinating. This is a very pretty number in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a ringing, provocative poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:20
The Laughing Matter
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There\'s so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:15
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There\'s so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:15
Don\'t Let It Own You
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Your work truly captures a person Tristan. I hope you never stop writing. There’s always something to be learned.
May 7th, 2025 12:41
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Your work truly captures a person Tristan. I hope you never stop writing. There’s always something to be learned.
May 7th, 2025 12:41
Don\'t Let It Own You
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the issue of getting your permit to live in hell, as for most people life gets tough and one time or another. I understand the message of not letting it own you, which is a very positive statement, sometimes it\'s just not that simple, nicely crafted meaningful write
May 7th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the issue of getting your permit to live in hell, as for most people life gets tough and one time or another. I understand the message of not letting it own you, which is a very positive statement, sometimes it\'s just not that simple, nicely crafted meaningful write
May 7th, 2025 12:33
Don\'t Let It Own You
orchidee said:
Erm spinach has no fury?! Good write Pop... erm Tristan. lol. I write some rubbish - sometimes! heehee.
May 7th, 2025 11:50
orchidee said:
Erm spinach has no fury?! Good write Pop... erm Tristan. lol. I write some rubbish - sometimes! heehee.
May 7th, 2025 11:50
Don\'t Let It Own You
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
The Laughing Matter
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
The Laughing Matter
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
The Laughing Matter
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
The Laughing Matter
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
The Laughing Matter
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
The Laughing Matter
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
Cross-Examination
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
What If?
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
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