Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Through a Window Darkly
Neville said:



This can not have been easy to write surely .. so many exceptional turns of phrase it would be nigh on impossible to single each one out and place them in any preferred or chronological order .. the black dog becomes a paler genus but we all see beneath the grim faΓ§ade .. Neville

November 14th, 2024 02:09

Through a Window Darkly
Cheeky Missy said:

I stumbled after the resonating lines took an unexpected turn, leaving me at the crossroads looking after the speaker who disappeared in the murkier fog. Excellently rendered with a deeply haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.

November 14th, 2024 02:00

Through a Window Darkly
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!! 😲
What a powerful and captivating
and emotional write on the
feelings and emotions depression
any person can be trapped in! 😒
Awesomazing imagery and
word choices, brilliantly composed!!πŸ’―
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

November 13th, 2024 23:35

Through a Window Darkly
sorenbarrett said:

Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber tones.

November 13th, 2024 21:42

Through a Window Darkly
orchidee said:

If it wasn\'t so serious, i would say \'Good write, putrid one\'! (yuk. lol).

November 13th, 2024 10:54

Through a Window Darkly
2781 said:

\'Death and life are in the power of the tongue:

November 13th, 2024 09:50

FEAR
NinjaGirl said:

I do think you\'re fond of spelling, (: I quite like this series and hope it brings many to thought.

November 12th, 2024 19:25

FEAR
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘
A terrorIFIC Acrostic,
sCaRY great imagery!! 😱
Two thumbs up,
If I had three hands
I\'d give you three!! πŸ₯‡
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad

November 12th, 2024 14:52

FEAR
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

November 12th, 2024 12:21

FEAR
orchidee said:

That you there in that pic? Yep, it\'s fairly scary! lol.

November 12th, 2024 10:27

FEAR
sorenbarrett said:

A great acrostic that warns us to not become what we fear then we would have to live with italways

November 12th, 2024 10:10

FEAR
2781 said:

There is no fear in love; but perfect love casts out fear:

Unfortunately for many they never get to hear!

November 12th, 2024 08:49

FEAR
arqios said:

Scary indeed. There was this book on the net about an experiment in a jail with guards and inmates studying how good people become bad!

November 12th, 2024 07:30

SLAVERY
Neville said:



an excellent choice of vocabulary to describe certain recent events and probable perceived future eventualities .. me ma told me to never wish my time away but I so hope the next 4 years go by quick .. am so glad we appear to be on the same side Tristan .. Neville πŸ‘

November 12th, 2024 00:19

SLAVERY
NinjaGirl said:

It\'s funny--sad rather-- to see what the country is supposed to stand for all slip away.

November 11th, 2024 22:00

SLAVERY
Mutley Ravishes said:

Who does Orange Man answer to?
Who does Woke Woman answer to?
The Mosquito Mafia have left plenty of clues


November 11th, 2024 18:47

SLAVERY
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

November 11th, 2024 15:05

SLAVERY
orchidee said:

If only it was dodgy hairstyles we had to be worried about....!

November 11th, 2024 12:40

SLAVERY
Teddy.15 said:

Powerful and brilliantly written. I cannot believe how so many have been tricked by empty promises, I\'d gladly eat my words dear Tristan if I\'m wrong, but I am with all those who are dreading the next month\'s and years of this incredibly ugly man. 🌹

November 11th, 2024 08:40

SLAVERY
Doggerel Dave said:

I do believe you are not that keen on the result of a recent election......πŸ‘

November 11th, 2024 08:07

Caged Dancers
arqios said:

Quite a visual menagerie in verse! πŸ‘πŸ»

November 10th, 2024 17:01

Caged Dancers
sorenbarrett said:

I’d rather dark poem with a utopian almost feel. Well written and somewhat mine puzzling.

November 10th, 2024 12:10

Caged Dancers
orchidee said:

Good write T.

November 10th, 2024 10:21

CHILDREN
Doggerel Dave said:

Neat and concise is something I can handle - many thanks.
Sometimes it does happen, children act on their judgement, and thus we have progress, but improvements forward are patchy in the extreme.

November 9th, 2024 15:58

CHILDREN
sorenbarrett said:

A frightening thought that’s all too true well written and nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing.

November 9th, 2024 15:30

CHILDREN
Thad Wilk said:

An awesome Acrostic
poem, strong feelings
and message indeed! πŸ’―
Short yet succinct
and my pleasure to read!! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad

November 9th, 2024 12:57

CHILDREN
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

November 9th, 2024 11:50

CHILDREN
orchidee said:

Good write T.

November 9th, 2024 10:07

ANTICHRIST
MR.apocalypse said:

no fight ever is just one sided. no atack is without meaning. common opinions are the ones that are the most misguided

November 8th, 2024 14:58

ANTICHRIST
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning
and thought provoking i\'d say!! πŸ€”
Awesome presentation,
just blew me away! πŸ’―
Much enjoyed my friend!! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 8th, 2024 14:56



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