Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Those Who Lie In Wait
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
The Tempest\'s Strike
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
The Tempest\'s Strike
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
The Tempest\'s Strike
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
The Sullen Swimmer
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
The Sullen Swimmer
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
The Sullen Swimmer
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
To Sophie
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
To Sophie
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
The Endless Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
The Endless Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
Meltdown
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
Meltdown
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
Meltdown
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
An Ode to Heartache
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
An Ode to Heartache
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
The Planet
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
The Planet
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
Tomb of Obscurity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
Inclusive
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
Inclusive
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so simple we all hold prejudices maybe not racial, gender or about religion but what of against murderers, rapists, liars, the ugly, obnoxious, those that hold different opinions than us. A wonderful write one that needs addressing.
August 7th, 2024 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so simple we all hold prejudices maybe not racial, gender or about religion but what of against murderers, rapists, liars, the ugly, obnoxious, those that hold different opinions than us. A wonderful write one that needs addressing.
August 7th, 2024 18:20
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