Comments received on poems by Shakerite
Black beauty eulogy
Debsspot said:
Thanks for sharing. It hurts but thats because ralph meant so much. His love was a gift you will always treasure.
November 26th, 2018 05:13
Debsspot said:
Thanks for sharing. It hurts but thats because ralph meant so much. His love was a gift you will always treasure.
November 26th, 2018 05:13
Starling Murmuration
Lorna said:
This is really odd because Murmuration is a word I just learned the other day - although I have often watched the birds do this...... and I was storing it for a future poem! You got it first! Good one! It\'s something to see and often no one is watching them!
March 21st, 2018 06:42
Lorna said:
This is really odd because Murmuration is a word I just learned the other day - although I have often watched the birds do this...... and I was storing it for a future poem! You got it first! Good one! It\'s something to see and often no one is watching them!
March 21st, 2018 06:42
A Roving (The idea of March)
Nicholas Browning said:
My parents were watching Gladiator yesterday, haha. Oh how everything ties together! Nicely done.
March 16th, 2018 19:03
Nicholas Browning said:
My parents were watching Gladiator yesterday, haha. Oh how everything ties together! Nicely done.
March 16th, 2018 19:03
Dowsabel
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great day n metaphor, creatively expressed. So appealing she ought to be touched n moved. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:56
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great day n metaphor, creatively expressed. So appealing she ought to be touched n moved. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:56
You see me, I see you
Invisible Scars said:
It seems like you care very much about this person. You express these emotions very beautiful.
August 25th, 2017 21:57
Invisible Scars said:
It seems like you care very much about this person. You express these emotions very beautiful.
August 25th, 2017 21:57
You see me, I see you
Edthepoet said:
Genius lives in simplicity..sprinkle on some honest feelings and poetry is born! Great write shakerite.
August 25th, 2017 20:49
Edthepoet said:
Genius lives in simplicity..sprinkle on some honest feelings and poetry is born! Great write shakerite.
August 25th, 2017 20:49
Enchantment
burning-embers said:
Cor! She sounds lovely. Nice writing sir. Such finesse and femininity always makes me feel ugly. Thanks
August 19th, 2017 22:03
burning-embers said:
Cor! She sounds lovely. Nice writing sir. Such finesse and femininity always makes me feel ugly. Thanks
August 19th, 2017 22:03
Ludwig ii
Nicholas Browning said:
Good stuff. I have no idea who this person is, or was, but I get the feeling he was proud to be different. Thanks for this.
July 11th, 2017 16:52
Nicholas Browning said:
Good stuff. I have no idea who this person is, or was, but I get the feeling he was proud to be different. Thanks for this.
July 11th, 2017 16:52
Ludwig ii
Shakerite said:
Thank you my friends . I\'m glad you\'ve took the time out to reply.
July 11th, 2017 13:03
Shakerite said:
Thank you my friends . I\'m glad you\'ve took the time out to reply.
July 11th, 2017 13:03
Pompeii
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love the last line. \"Furnace frozen in time\".
July 4th, 2017 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love the last line. \"Furnace frozen in time\".
July 4th, 2017 00:48
Clandestine
FredPeyer said:
Fine poem, and the last four lines are exactly why it isn\'t worth it.
June 29th, 2017 22:11
FredPeyer said:
Fine poem, and the last four lines are exactly why it isn\'t worth it.
June 29th, 2017 22:11
Clandestine
malubotelho said:
Nicely written. Dangerous thing to do. Full of emotions if done it right.
June 29th, 2017 20:58
malubotelho said:
Nicely written. Dangerous thing to do. Full of emotions if done it right.
June 29th, 2017 20:58
Cherry Blossom
malubotelho said:
Your writing is very delicious. I felt like eating ice cream. Lovely
June 29th, 2017 20:56
malubotelho said:
Your writing is very delicious. I felt like eating ice cream. Lovely
June 29th, 2017 20:56
Cherry Blossom
Lizzy Renee said:
What better words to describe Cherry Blossoms in such a way. Beautiful.
April 27th, 2017 09:34
Lizzy Renee said:
What better words to describe Cherry Blossoms in such a way. Beautiful.
April 27th, 2017 09:34
Seraph (Sonnet)
Augustus said:
Was not familiar with volta or turn. We learn so much at MPS. As I interpret the turn, a moment of grace, or from one thought to another and then apply that to your sonnet I believe you were successful. From angels and heartstrings ant celestial things suddenly there was a heart ripped to shreds. Mission accomplished. Nice rhyme and meter. Well done.
March 12th, 2017 23:03
Augustus said:
Was not familiar with volta or turn. We learn so much at MPS. As I interpret the turn, a moment of grace, or from one thought to another and then apply that to your sonnet I believe you were successful. From angels and heartstrings ant celestial things suddenly there was a heart ripped to shreds. Mission accomplished. Nice rhyme and meter. Well done.
March 12th, 2017 23:03
Seraph (Sonnet)
Shakerite said:
The turn was difficult but just about got away with it
March 12th, 2017 20:44
Shakerite said:
The turn was difficult but just about got away with it
March 12th, 2017 20:44
A roving (The Ides of March)
Augustus said:
Great idea for a poem. Carefully executed.
March 11th, 2017 16:30
Augustus said:
Great idea for a poem. Carefully executed.
March 11th, 2017 16:30
Red the Imposter
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow witty poem. Red can symbolise both the good and bad like every colors I suppose. Reds God is Isis woah, the Red Devils.
I like the sunset red stanza best. Kudos.
Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest, u r most welcome to.
March 8th, 2017 14:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow witty poem. Red can symbolise both the good and bad like every colors I suppose. Reds God is Isis woah, the Red Devils.
I like the sunset red stanza best. Kudos.
Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest, u r most welcome to.
March 8th, 2017 14:10
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