Comments received on poems by Shakerite
Red the Imposter
willyweed said:
this is good , different, a change of pace. write on! ww
March 4th, 2017 21:13
willyweed said:
this is good , different, a change of pace. write on! ww
March 4th, 2017 21:13
Le Fille aux Cheveux de Lin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ah Yes i remember her well ! The Girl with the Flaxen Hair ~ imortalised by Debussy ! Love the message of the poem and also the structure replete wit rhyme & rhythm ! One must also praise thee for thy elegant and amorous usage of Language. I Elizabethan England ~ Shakespeare new full well that the language of his era added spice and sensuality to his amorous odes ! Alas in the reign of Elizabeth 2 ~ we are cursed with text speak \"snippets of love !\" I LUV U 4 EVR LOL ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 14th, 2017 08:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ah Yes i remember her well ! The Girl with the Flaxen Hair ~ imortalised by Debussy ! Love the message of the poem and also the structure replete wit rhyme & rhythm ! One must also praise thee for thy elegant and amorous usage of Language. I Elizabethan England ~ Shakespeare new full well that the language of his era added spice and sensuality to his amorous odes ! Alas in the reign of Elizabeth 2 ~ we are cursed with text speak \"snippets of love !\" I LUV U 4 EVR LOL ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 14th, 2017 08:42
Starling Murmuration
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow impressive diction here, extraordinary and high English. As a bird lover I enjoyed yor description of how u put it esp how u called them natures acrobats. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:48
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow impressive diction here, extraordinary and high English. As a bird lover I enjoyed yor description of how u put it esp how u called them natures acrobats. Kudos.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to. Even one line will do.
January 29th, 2017 03:48
Starling Murmuration
Shakerite said:
Thank you . I was worried a Starling Murmaration wasnt a common event in the US like it is over here .
January 28th, 2017 08:54
Shakerite said:
Thank you . I was worried a Starling Murmaration wasnt a common event in the US like it is over here .
January 28th, 2017 08:54
Starling Murmuration
P.H.Rose said:
Very good really
Like this...
Well done...
January 28th, 2017 07:51
P.H.Rose said:
Very good really
Like this...
Well done...
January 28th, 2017 07:51
The pawn
Augustus said:
Yes, very creative. We have so many interesting people on this site.
January 27th, 2017 13:06
Augustus said:
Yes, very creative. We have so many interesting people on this site.
January 27th, 2017 13:06
The Fall
Corey said:
My favorite season. I love to travel the interstate during the fall. Beautiful scenery! Nice poem!!
January 26th, 2017 10:36
Corey said:
My favorite season. I love to travel the interstate during the fall. Beautiful scenery! Nice poem!!
January 26th, 2017 10:36
Black Sheep
Corey said:
Hi Shakerite, This is such a delightful write! I truly enjoyed it!
January 25th, 2017 19:40
Corey said:
Hi Shakerite, This is such a delightful write! I truly enjoyed it!
January 25th, 2017 19:40
Black Sheep
Augustus said:
Married a red head. Loved your poem. Careful in the sun. Hugs.
January 25th, 2017 17:21
Augustus said:
Married a red head. Loved your poem. Careful in the sun. Hugs.
January 25th, 2017 17:21
Black Sheep
WriteBeLight said:
Very great poem! Love the last line, in particular. Very clever!
January 25th, 2017 12:20
WriteBeLight said:
Very great poem! Love the last line, in particular. Very clever!
January 25th, 2017 12:20
Black Sheep
janetaylor said:
what a fantastic write! i love red hair myself....but this piece is so magnificent because it weaves in humor with profound wisdom. the black sheep lived longer LOL.....and i truly get this at the deepest level. my husband and i left a fundamentalist religion and we were ostracized by community, family and friends. we truly are the black sheep. thank you for this gem!
January 25th, 2017 11:19
janetaylor said:
what a fantastic write! i love red hair myself....but this piece is so magnificent because it weaves in humor with profound wisdom. the black sheep lived longer LOL.....and i truly get this at the deepest level. my husband and i left a fundamentalist religion and we were ostracized by community, family and friends. we truly are the black sheep. thank you for this gem!
January 25th, 2017 11:19
Femme Fatale
Augustus said:
If I am not mistaken this is about a morning breakfast pop tart, right? Heh,heh. They\'re too sweet for me too.
January 23rd, 2017 17:40
Augustus said:
If I am not mistaken this is about a morning breakfast pop tart, right? Heh,heh. They\'re too sweet for me too.
January 23rd, 2017 17:40
Femme Fatale
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ We have all been there and sometimes we get bitten ~ hence next time we are twice shy ! Yours BRIAN
January 23rd, 2017 10:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ We have all been there and sometimes we get bitten ~ hence next time we are twice shy ! Yours BRIAN
January 23rd, 2017 10:13
She walks in Beauty
WriteBeLight said:
I see a flowing individual, as is the case with your beautiful flowing words. Very lovely.
January 22nd, 2017 09:21
WriteBeLight said:
I see a flowing individual, as is the case with your beautiful flowing words. Very lovely.
January 22nd, 2017 09:21
Four Seasons of Darwen
Shakerite said:
Thank you very much for all the kind comments . Home is beautiful in the summer but in the winter Darwen shows its teeth .
January 21st, 2017 11:48
Shakerite said:
Thank you very much for all the kind comments . Home is beautiful in the summer but in the winter Darwen shows its teeth .
January 21st, 2017 11:48
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