Ballad of Jealousy
jccaramelbarbie said:

NIce poem but dont be jealous that she or helooked at im, him andhim maybe she or he wanted to be fo certain that you were the one :)

February 6th, 2017 09:20

Ballad of Jealousy
Edward_McLucky said:

Thank you both for being so nice. Glad to have found this website.

January 20th, 2017 14:49

Ballad of Jealousy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME EDWARD ~ Thanks for your first \"poem\" I trust you found it cathartic>. It is a poem because i has STRUCTURE ~ Lines & rhythm ~ modern poems don\'t have to rhyme no more ! It also has a message which I am sure many of the GUYS & GIRLS can empathise with. I my case sometimes (along the way) I have met a GIRL who I am so in love with that I stopped ~ looking at ~ phoning ~ texting ~ dating etc OTHER GIRLS and desired only her ~ when she feels the same way about me it is HEAVEN ~ BUT (as you describe) when she is not \"satisfied\" with me and continues to \"smile\" at HIM & HIM & HIM ~ then it is HELL ! Thanks for caring ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK).

January 20th, 2017 13:50