Comments received on poems by JamieDayDream
Where is me?
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The beat goes on brother; now with the pen. Check the NAMI (USA) site for additional support regarding your good health goals.
October 29th, 2017 22:46
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The beat goes on brother; now with the pen. Check the NAMI (USA) site for additional support regarding your good health goals.
October 29th, 2017 22:46
Morning time
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, such a beautiful picture painted in my mind! Thank you
October 10th, 2017 17:56
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, such a beautiful picture painted in my mind! Thank you
October 10th, 2017 17:56
Countryside Life
Michael Edwards said:
You invite grammar corrections and I can\'t see any - all I would suggest for the sake of flow is that you replace \'similar to\' with \'as\' - great piece of work Jamie
September 15th, 2017 23:43
Michael Edwards said:
You invite grammar corrections and I can\'t see any - all I would suggest for the sake of flow is that you replace \'similar to\' with \'as\' - great piece of work Jamie
September 15th, 2017 23:43
Countryside Life
dusk arising said:
Is your loneliness within or without? Would you feel less lonely in a crowd or would you feel like everyone was looking at you, or maybe ignoring you?
Countryside is what you make it. Much like life itself. Nice bit of writing though.
September 15th, 2017 22:13
dusk arising said:
Is your loneliness within or without? Would you feel less lonely in a crowd or would you feel like everyone was looking at you, or maybe ignoring you?
Countryside is what you make it. Much like life itself. Nice bit of writing though.
September 15th, 2017 22:13
Countryside Life
lasergraph said:
I was raised in the country and enjoyed the revisit. Happy birthday.
September 15th, 2017 21:13
lasergraph said:
I was raised in the country and enjoyed the revisit. Happy birthday.
September 15th, 2017 21:13
I am sorry my fitness instructor
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 17th, 2017 19:13
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 17th, 2017 19:13
When God Spoke to me
orchidee said:
A fine write. Well, God\'s \'Attorney\' can be Jesus, in a way. or more accurate I think, He is OUR Advocate or Mediator, appearing on our behalf for our defence.
April 7th, 2017 03:41
orchidee said:
A fine write. Well, God\'s \'Attorney\' can be Jesus, in a way. or more accurate I think, He is OUR Advocate or Mediator, appearing on our behalf for our defence.
April 7th, 2017 03:41
When God Spoke to me
Beautyqueen46 said:
This was so beautifully written loved it
February 1st, 2017 20:46
Beautyqueen46 said:
This was so beautifully written loved it
February 1st, 2017 20:46
