Comments received on poems by Winfield
The Wee Hours of The Morning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ My Great Grandparents had a GAZUNDER (Chember Pot) so called because it GOES UNDER THE BED ! This was essential because their LOO (JOHN) was outside the house. Artists call it the TO LOO LOOSE TRECK especially if accompanied by DIARRHEA ! It is an interesting topic (but a real one for many) for a first poem and it is well penned. I\'m OK if I don\'t drink after 10pm ~ I\'m normally in bed by midnight ! Thanks for sharing ~ great title ~ but no visual ! Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2017 18:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ My Great Grandparents had a GAZUNDER (Chember Pot) so called because it GOES UNDER THE BED ! This was essential because their LOO (JOHN) was outside the house. Artists call it the TO LOO LOOSE TRECK especially if accompanied by DIARRHEA ! It is an interesting topic (but a real one for many) for a first poem and it is well penned. I\'m OK if I don\'t drink after 10pm ~ I\'m normally in bed by midnight ! Thanks for sharing ~ great title ~ but no visual ! Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
February 7th, 2017 18:46
The Wee Hours of The Morning
P.H.Rose said:
Love this.
Made me laugh.
I suffer this exact
Problem...and so
My wife does suffer
Also..being woke up.
And she lets me know !!!
Well done!!!
February 7th, 2017 15:22
P.H.Rose said:
Love this.
Made me laugh.
I suffer this exact
Problem...and so
My wife does suffer
Also..being woke up.
And she lets me know !!!
Well done!!!
February 7th, 2017 15:22
The Wee Hours of The Morning
Corey said:
This is what I\'ll be thinking of on my next \"wee\" hours in the morning, journey to pee, wearing a smile on my face. I enjoyed this cute piece. Great write!
February 7th, 2017 14:49
Corey said:
This is what I\'ll be thinking of on my next \"wee\" hours in the morning, journey to pee, wearing a smile on my face. I enjoyed this cute piece. Great write!
February 7th, 2017 14:49
The Wee Hours of The Morning
Jeff said:
Lol...very funny and nicely written. Great job
February 7th, 2017 14:11
Jeff said:
Lol...very funny and nicely written. Great job
February 7th, 2017 14:11