Comments received on poems by Lolomgwtf
I touch the rain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOLO ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ nice style ~ three neat triplets ! Personally I liked the repeat of I TOUCH THE RAIN a very evocative line in a very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2017 06:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOLO ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ nice style ~ three neat triplets ! Personally I liked the repeat of I TOUCH THE RAIN a very evocative line in a very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
February 13th, 2017 06:58
I touch the rain
P.X. Vexxus said:
Nice write!
Criticism: Use more diverse vocabulary!
February 13th, 2017 05:18
P.X. Vexxus said:
Nice write!
Criticism: Use more diverse vocabulary!
February 13th, 2017 05:18
