Comments received on poems by Toopka
House but no Home
mvvenkataraman said:
What a lovely poem from a pained child!
What a trauma is had by this human soul!
Very moving account of a pathetic life
Let those who decide to marry each other
Never separate as that causes untold agony,
Please plan and live to stop heart-breaks
To a soul born out of your love or lust?
mvvenkataraman
July 19th, 2013 13:46
mvvenkataraman said:
What a lovely poem from a pained child!
What a trauma is had by this human soul!
Very moving account of a pathetic life
Let those who decide to marry each other
Never separate as that causes untold agony,
Please plan and live to stop heart-breaks
To a soul born out of your love or lust?
mvvenkataraman
July 19th, 2013 13:46
Tears with Bullets
Emi said:
Somewhat frightening at first... Well written, good job. :)
May 25th, 2011 18:36
Emi said:
Somewhat frightening at first... Well written, good job. :)
May 25th, 2011 18:36
my mom again colorful
Emi said:
Very sweet. :) Short, but I definitely love it. :)
May 8th, 2011 16:54
Emi said:
Very sweet. :) Short, but I definitely love it. :)
May 8th, 2011 16:54
