Comments received on poems by JJCooke
The Visit
Garry said:
Do i detect inspiration from the grisly pen of of Edgar Allan Poe? The Raven perhaps?
Either way it\'s very gothic.
Good place to finish. I hope it would die but fear it wouldn\'t.
March 24th, 2017 14:49
Garry said:
Do i detect inspiration from the grisly pen of of Edgar Allan Poe? The Raven perhaps?
Either way it\'s very gothic.
Good place to finish. I hope it would die but fear it wouldn\'t.
March 24th, 2017 14:49
Complain
Garry said:
Very good. I\'m sure both sides of the political spectrum could adopt this as their rallying cry. Nice rythms and beat.
March 23rd, 2017 17:36
Garry said:
Very good. I\'m sure both sides of the political spectrum could adopt this as their rallying cry. Nice rythms and beat.
March 23rd, 2017 17:36
She Shines
Garry said:
Bleak. Time will tell. Very much enjoyed this. .
Thank you
March 20th, 2017 16:58
Garry said:
Bleak. Time will tell. Very much enjoyed this. .
Thank you
March 20th, 2017 16:58
Nightmare
Garry said:
Very dark. Hope you don\'t really y have the dream all the time. Lay off the cheese.
Am definitely going to check out your other poems
March 20th, 2017 16:56
Garry said:
Very dark. Hope you don\'t really y have the dream all the time. Lay off the cheese.
Am definitely going to check out your other poems
March 20th, 2017 16:56
She Shines
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there all we need to do is go towards it.
March 18th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there all we need to do is go towards it.
March 18th, 2017 01:34
Look Back
Hypothesis said:
Memories are brilliant. Especially when you recall your early childhood years with just the remote control of being a kid within a McDonald\'s world.
Good read poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:37
Hypothesis said:
Memories are brilliant. Especially when you recall your early childhood years with just the remote control of being a kid within a McDonald\'s world.
Good read poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:37
Just hopefully,
Tony36 said:
Children are hope for the future and a blessing for today. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:19
Tony36 said:
Children are hope for the future and a blessing for today. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:19
Just hopefully,
Hypothesis said:
A child\'s love is memorable. Those images will never grow faint, but more or less appreciate the meaning of true parenthood.
The innocence of a child can be treacherous. Just remember him/her will still be God\'s children no matter what age selection.
Good read poet
March 14th, 2017 07:08
Hypothesis said:
A child\'s love is memorable. Those images will never grow faint, but more or less appreciate the meaning of true parenthood.
The innocence of a child can be treacherous. Just remember him/her will still be God\'s children no matter what age selection.
Good read poet
March 14th, 2017 07:08
Just hopefully,
Pintu Mahakul said:
Affection for a child is honestly expressed in this beautiful poem. Love wont dim at all here. This is very interesting poem shared.
March 14th, 2017 06:45
Pintu Mahakul said:
Affection for a child is honestly expressed in this beautiful poem. Love wont dim at all here. This is very interesting poem shared.
March 14th, 2017 06:45
Just hopefully,
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are wonderful and should be nurtured. They will leave you in time but should know that they are always welcome and loved when at home. Good write.
March 14th, 2017 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Children are wonderful and should be nurtured. They will leave you in time but should know that they are always welcome and loved when at home. Good write.
March 14th, 2017 03:11
Just hopefully,
Miss.Steele said:
Love your poem!
I have no kids but I could feel your love and care.
March 14th, 2017 02:08
Miss.Steele said:
Love your poem!
I have no kids but I could feel your love and care.
March 14th, 2017 02:08
The Snow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JJ ~ I guess you still have a lot of snow about in SPOKANE (great place to live in !). We have had none this Year in SE England due to increased CO2 levels causing global warming ~ but don\'t the President ! Love the structure of your poem ~ 12 lines and rhyming couplets ~ almost a Sonnet ! I also love the subject \"The Treasures of the Snow\". We have had some snow in Scotland but that is 700 miles North ! Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
March 12th, 2017 16:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JJ ~ I guess you still have a lot of snow about in SPOKANE (great place to live in !). We have had none this Year in SE England due to increased CO2 levels causing global warming ~ but don\'t the President ! Love the structure of your poem ~ 12 lines and rhyming couplets ~ almost a Sonnet ! I also love the subject \"The Treasures of the Snow\". We have had some snow in Scotland but that is 700 miles North ! Thanks for sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
March 12th, 2017 16:54
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