Comments received on poems by laurenc03
Anxiety
Edthepoet said:
Nice write, we have no control over the rising tides, yet we don\'t have to sink nor do we have to swim against the current, if we lay back and surrender control we float on the waves and ride them wherever they take us.
March 15th, 2017 10:10
Edthepoet said:
Nice write, we have no control over the rising tides, yet we don\'t have to sink nor do we have to swim against the current, if we lay back and surrender control we float on the waves and ride them wherever they take us.
March 15th, 2017 10:10
Anxiety
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LAUREN ~ Liverpool is the Poetic Capital of England (Roger McGough ~ John Lennon etc) so you are in the right place ! Loved your poem because it is so so free verse and discursive it just flows like Liverpool Water from a Scouse Tap ! (You will have to humour me I\'m an Evertonian and to make matters worse I live in the SOUTH of ENGLAND ~ for employment !) I love the point where you turn the tap off \"Whilst it feels like I am drowning now ~ some part of me knows that the calm will soon come again ! AMEN\". That\'s what a PSYCHOTHERAPIST does ~ restores CALM to CONFUSED MINDS ~ Poetry is the same it restores SANITY ! Keep WRITING & keep COUNSELLING ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
March 14th, 2017 15:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LAUREN ~ Liverpool is the Poetic Capital of England (Roger McGough ~ John Lennon etc) so you are in the right place ! Loved your poem because it is so so free verse and discursive it just flows like Liverpool Water from a Scouse Tap ! (You will have to humour me I\'m an Evertonian and to make matters worse I live in the SOUTH of ENGLAND ~ for employment !) I love the point where you turn the tap off \"Whilst it feels like I am drowning now ~ some part of me knows that the calm will soon come again ! AMEN\". That\'s what a PSYCHOTHERAPIST does ~ restores CALM to CONFUSED MINDS ~ Poetry is the same it restores SANITY ! Keep WRITING & keep COUNSELLING ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
March 14th, 2017 15:10
Anxiety
Christina8 said:
You did a wonderful job on your poem. I too suffer from anxiety. It\'s hard to describe to other people. I hope you found writing it out to be cathartic. Thanks for sharing!
March 14th, 2017 13:40
Christina8 said:
You did a wonderful job on your poem. I too suffer from anxiety. It\'s hard to describe to other people. I hope you found writing it out to be cathartic. Thanks for sharing!
March 14th, 2017 13:40
Anxiety
laurenc03 said:
Would really appreciate feedback, never posted before!
I know it\'s not great but it\'s something I wrote in one quick, rushed go and rather than overthinking it and not putting it anywhere I decided to put it out there and see if I could get some useful feedback, thanks x
March 14th, 2017 13:31
laurenc03 said:
Would really appreciate feedback, never posted before!
I know it\'s not great but it\'s something I wrote in one quick, rushed go and rather than overthinking it and not putting it anywhere I decided to put it out there and see if I could get some useful feedback, thanks x
March 14th, 2017 13:31
