Comments received on poems by Acrimony_Paradox
Material Things
Hypothesis said:
Oh so very true poet. For you see this world we live in; is conditioned to the deceptive items we\'ve followed trying to idolize the wrong person instead of Christ Jesus himself.
Materialism is a disease that often takes place with the younger generation first. Then flickers downward to the Hollywood development. Do not be deceived by the fashion statement.
Because after death you cannot partake those items you solely owned before. The Egyptians were buried with that in an early stage. Now I see it portrayed once again but through social media outlets.
Self loathe is a sin. Among pride and the other comandments stated. Good read poet.
Awake the masses!
March 17th, 2017 01:46
Hypothesis said:
Oh so very true poet. For you see this world we live in; is conditioned to the deceptive items we\'ve followed trying to idolize the wrong person instead of Christ Jesus himself.
Materialism is a disease that often takes place with the younger generation first. Then flickers downward to the Hollywood development. Do not be deceived by the fashion statement.
Because after death you cannot partake those items you solely owned before. The Egyptians were buried with that in an early stage. Now I see it portrayed once again but through social media outlets.
Self loathe is a sin. Among pride and the other comandments stated. Good read poet.
Awake the masses!
March 17th, 2017 01:46
Forever
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ which I found very intriguing ! This is Classic Poetry ~ Throbbing with repetition ~ rhyme and rhythm ~ awesome. Stanza 1. Love the (repeated) opening line and all the metaphor you use to describe shattered love ! S 2. I can feel all the agony and angst in this verse ! S 3. This is very powerful and your message is crystal clear ~ THIS REALLY IS THE END !Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems and my FUSION ~ Thanks B
March 16th, 2017 08:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ which I found very intriguing ! This is Classic Poetry ~ Throbbing with repetition ~ rhyme and rhythm ~ awesome. Stanza 1. Love the (repeated) opening line and all the metaphor you use to describe shattered love ! S 2. I can feel all the agony and angst in this verse ! S 3. This is very powerful and your message is crystal clear ~ THIS REALLY IS THE END !Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems and my FUSION ~ Thanks B
March 16th, 2017 08:44
