Comments received on poems by B.rod



I miss you
Mello said:

Well written.

February 10th, 2023 04:04

I miss you
L. B. Mek said:

what a beautiful dedication
\'I believe
in the interconnectivity of all matter
and that somehow, someway
these words, you\'ve shared
of inked yearning and sincere emotion
will be delivered, to that vassal of hope
you once awaited and now, carry
with you, in each Brave breath
of life\'
stay strong! dear poet
(I\'m so sorry for the unimaginable, hurt
you\'ve experienced
and I laud, your capacity
to evolve your pain and suffering
into empathetic words
of comforting poetry
to soothe and support
others who may be going through
that same suffering
as they come across your words)

June 6th, 2022 06:26

I miss you
orchidee said:

A terrible thing to experience, surely. The strangeness of being alive before birth, and then not there. A sensitive write B.

June 6th, 2022 03:22

I\'m yours
Garry said:

Very nice

May 3rd, 2017 03:55

I\'m yours
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

May 3rd, 2017 00:57

Too little too late
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write

April 24th, 2017 01:42

The unknown
Garry said:

Love ideas about contradiction and confusion. Good stuff.

April 12th, 2017 03:20

Me vs me
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we all have our inner battles to overcome.

April 7th, 2017 00:37

Me vs me
valene said:

I get it, and being a poet can make it worse at times. Maybe because we\'re more aware of our emotions, and poetry gives us a way to express them. BUT, there are times I just want to stop thinking all together, cos of so many different issues I\'m trying to deal with. For me at least, I find as a poet, I sometimes get to caught up in my thoughts and feelings and it\'s difficult to shut my mind off.
Thanks for expressing what I think many of us feel from time to time in this well conceived poetic piece.

valene

April 6th, 2017 16:22

Me vs me
Garry said:

Good message well written

April 6th, 2017 14:31

Me vs me
Bay said:

Powerful message spoken effectively through such a short poem. This is both simple and complex at the same time. Truly powerful.

April 6th, 2017 13:20

Me vs me
Discreation said:

I\'m trapped
Alone
Won\'t you set me free
Cursed to this purgatory
Cursed by me

Great Work. I can\'t wait to hear more.



April 6th, 2017 12:00

Me vs me
Aamina said:

That\'s so true. I guess often time people are too worried with worldly affairs to be at peace . Maybe the ways that you are at war with yourself are awfully personal you\'re forced to mask it all

April 6th, 2017 11:16

Me vs me
willyweed said:

I guess we all wear a mask of sorts.
good write

April 6th, 2017 11:09

Me vs me
King Author said:

nice, i have those fights as well...

April 6th, 2017 10:39

Me vs me
Hopey_xx said:

Great write! That\'s a good thing to think about, people may look fine, but really they might be fighting battles we know nothing about.

April 6th, 2017 10:30

I hate that I love you
willyweed said:

my wife is from Brooklyn, write on ww

April 1st, 2017 12:33

Perspectives
willyweed said:

we never think of one and others point of view only our own, which can be sad like two guys looking at opposite sides of a car one says its a wreak and other says not a scratch? good poem B.

April 1st, 2017 12:30

Perspectives
Garry said:

Like it a lot. Thank you.

March 30th, 2017 11:13

Perspectives
Hypothesis said:

People will judge others before any eviction notice appeal. We as human beings will always become persecuted amongst the morality of evolution.

Good read poet.

March 30th, 2017 09:29

I hate that I love you
Garry said:

Some lovely ideas here. Life is full of contradictions most of the time.

March 30th, 2017 06:19

I hate that I love you
brandon k f said:

Good stuff, keep writing

March 29th, 2017 20:50