Comments received on poems by Joyleen
What If?
Garry said:
I really like the closing two lines. A final sad realisation beautifully worked up to. They are almost vivid enough to stand alone. Well done.!
April 2nd, 2017 03:13
Garry said:
I really like the closing two lines. A final sad realisation beautifully worked up to. They are almost vivid enough to stand alone. Well done.!
April 2nd, 2017 03:13
What If?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JOY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which I found both interesting an challenging. My answer ~ if asked those questions by you ~ would be YES to every one. Because you seem like a very sincere Young Lady. Yours BRIAN (UK). Thanks for REAL TIME to show the development of your poem. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 1st, 2017 17:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JOY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which I found both interesting an challenging. My answer ~ if asked those questions by you ~ would be YES to every one. Because you seem like a very sincere Young Lady. Yours BRIAN (UK). Thanks for REAL TIME to show the development of your poem. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 1st, 2017 17:36
