Comments received on poems by marylaine
jabroni
Louis Gibbs said:
Your unstructured, unpunctuated style works in this poem. I like it. Well done, Marylaine!
June 5th, 2017 17:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Your unstructured, unpunctuated style works in this poem. I like it. Well done, Marylaine!
June 5th, 2017 17:47
Virtual Escape
Goldfinch60 said:
So much time wasted when on line that the important things in our life are ignored - or forgotten. Good true write.
April 6th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So much time wasted when on line that the important things in our life are ignored - or forgotten. Good true write.
April 6th, 2017 00:39
Like what it seems
Garry said:
I love the last line. Seems to suugest lots of optimism in what might otherwise be a somewhat beak view.
I like bleak as well though.
Most of my poems seem to end bleakl even those that don\'t start out that way, which most of them do.
Look forward to your next posting
April 4th, 2017 16:13
Garry said:
I love the last line. Seems to suugest lots of optimism in what might otherwise be a somewhat beak view.
I like bleak as well though.
Most of my poems seem to end bleakl even those that don\'t start out that way, which most of them do.
Look forward to your next posting
April 4th, 2017 16:13
Like what it seems
willyweed said:
it can\'t be all that bad...can it?
good write! ww
April 4th, 2017 10:09
willyweed said:
it can\'t be all that bad...can it?
good write! ww
April 4th, 2017 10:09
