Comments received on poems by lilia lara
i\'m sorry
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LILIA ~ Thanks for a very poignant first poem ~ it throbs with angst and experience as well as rhythm ! In my own experience the Agony and Ecstasy of love is greater and deeper than adult love ! Because when I was a teen (not too long ago !) my visions and expectations of LOVE were very high and ideal ! I expected my \"first real love liaison\" to last for ever ! Of course it didn\'t and I wanted to die ! I recovered and lived to LOVE & LOSE again but this time it was slightly easier ~ it is an inevitable cycle. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN Please checks my poems ~ Thanks B
April 10th, 2017 16:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LILIA ~ Thanks for a very poignant first poem ~ it throbs with angst and experience as well as rhythm ! In my own experience the Agony and Ecstasy of love is greater and deeper than adult love ! Because when I was a teen (not too long ago !) my visions and expectations of LOVE were very high and ideal ! I expected my \"first real love liaison\" to last for ever ! Of course it didn\'t and I wanted to die ! I recovered and lived to LOVE & LOSE again but this time it was slightly easier ~ it is an inevitable cycle. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN Please checks my poems ~ Thanks B
April 10th, 2017 16:25
i\'m sorry
Marianne said:
I feel this so much .. I felt your words as they were my own Well done on an amazing write!! X
April 10th, 2017 13:10
Marianne said:
I feel this so much .. I felt your words as they were my own Well done on an amazing write!! X
April 10th, 2017 13:10
i\'m sorry
Jabberwocky said:
Yeah. That\'s what it feels like pretty much. It\'s hard and useless but that\'s how it is.
That don\'t deserve us, and we didn\'t deserve them.
April 10th, 2017 11:58
Jabberwocky said:
Yeah. That\'s what it feels like pretty much. It\'s hard and useless but that\'s how it is.
That don\'t deserve us, and we didn\'t deserve them.
April 10th, 2017 11:58
i\'m sorry
vvnrose said:
Oh my! I felt every word of this! Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2017 11:53
vvnrose said:
Oh my! I felt every word of this! Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2017 11:53
i\'m sorry
willyweed said:
welcome good write sorry for your pain writing seems to help so write on. ww
April 10th, 2017 11:50
willyweed said:
welcome good write sorry for your pain writing seems to help so write on. ww
April 10th, 2017 11:50