Comments on community poems by Sharkylang
- elegy for a dead dad (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Lovely.
Great structure and rhymes.
Lots of feels.
This is true poetry.
November 22nd, 2021 11:36
- I\'m scared (Anuradha)
Why m instead of I\'m?\"
November 21st, 2021 22:05
- All The Dreams (Satishverma)
Grapevines don\'t grow in the dark. They need sunlight.
November 21st, 2021 21:58
- Sunday (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
What the hell is this? This is an insult to the English language. The...
November 21st, 2021 20:12
- Unsincerely Yours (Neville)
That isn\'t a poem. That\'s just a sentence.
November 19th, 2021 08:40
- The invisible hands (Spilleronsheet)
Could be good if it had any structure, rhyming, or punctuation.
November 19th, 2021 08:37
- Robin (Lady Dale)
Really good, Lady Dale.
Short and sweet.
March 15th, 2018 16:07
- One Cup or Two... (Ivory)
Damn. I want a coffee now.
March 15th, 2018 01:11