Comments on community poems by dbremner
- You Make My Day (Cheeky Missy)
Sonnet par excellence!
January 19th, 2011 15:16 - Cherry Blossoms (StormyDay)
Bang on target!
January 19th, 2011 15:14 - Fire (Ilovecupcakes34)
Really good.
January 18th, 2011 16:07 - Snowscape (Cheeky Missy)
Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
January 18th, 2011 15:58 - Sight (StormyDay)
You've done really well on this and seem to have applied a lot of thought...
January 18th, 2011 15:56 - MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME (Jvl narasimha rao)
Absolutely excellent.
January 18th, 2011 15:52 - Love's Dilemma (Cheeky Missy)
Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
January 17th, 2011 13:05 - WHAT IS REAL BEAUTY? (Jvl narasimha rao)
Very well written, I liked it.
January 14th, 2011 15:54 - The Spider's Web (StormyDay)
Another really good Haiku. You must like writing them?
January 14th, 2011 12:49 - Poor Wittle Birdie? (Cheeky Missy)
A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
January 13th, 2011 14:35 - The Willow Tree (StormyDay)
Excellent Haiku.
January 13th, 2011 14:34 - Dear friend (Lezyl legaspi)
A very nice poem, I liked it a good deal.
January 11th, 2011 12:18 - A ball of fire wrapped around me. (Lifewellspoken)
Good words, AMAZING picture.
January 10th, 2011 15:49 - wathever (Crisnigger)
Good poem, well written.
January 10th, 2011 15:48 - Eyes (Dolphine29)
Very true and very well written. Posing the last line of part 3 as a...
January 10th, 2011 15:47
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