Comments on community poems by dbremner

• Without You (StormyDay) I'll tell you something straight - this poem is truly excellent and it's...
  January 17th, 2012 16:25
• Swan Song (Emi) Brilliant poem, especially so written in the 'first person' which I always...
  February 12th, 2011 05:28
• In Love's Haunts, Valentine..... (Cheeky Missy) Another really good one! No need to alter this at all, I love it!
  February 12th, 2011 05:26
• With You, Valentine..... (Cheeky Missy) Good piece sonneteer. Paints the description well.
  February 10th, 2011 15:32
• Always You (Emi) You have done really well here it's a nice poem full of sweetness.
  February 10th, 2011 15:29
• Why do we dream? (Dolphine29) Well written. You often have a philisophical aspect to your poems which...
  February 8th, 2011 17:15
• Shy (StormyDay) You've written this very well. Words and picture fit perfectly.
  February 8th, 2011 17:05
• Last Pieces (Emi) Very well written with some really good individual lines. I really like...
  February 8th, 2011 11:49
• at night (Breexbaby) Good poem - well written, some great rhymes.
  February 8th, 2011 11:46
• I Luv U 2 (Cheeky Missy) It is very well composed and so very romantic!
  February 8th, 2011 11:44
• Snow (StormyDay) Fine haiku on a natural theme as they are supposed to be. Great job with a...
  February 7th, 2011 16:43
• Has to be LOVE..... (Cheeky Missy) Wondefully written - wonderfully familiar!
  February 7th, 2011 13:17
• Our Garden (Emi) A really nice poem - good choice of flowers!
  February 7th, 2011 13:15
• Cherry and Valentine (Hidan) Well written - so very sad though.
  February 5th, 2011 16:32
• Drained (Erin wynette) Good poem.
  February 5th, 2011 16:31
• mommy (Bluesyzygy) Really nice poem.
  February 5th, 2011 16:30
• Mine..... (Cheeky Missy) Good stuff!
  February 5th, 2011 13:10
• Be Mine.... (Cheeky Missy) You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
  February 4th, 2011 15:35
• Tick Tock (Emi) This is absolutely BRILLIANT, one of the best poems I have ever read here...
  February 4th, 2011 15:33
• My Valentine.....??? (Cheeky Missy) Excellently composed.
  February 3rd, 2011 17:59
• Or So They Say (Emi) Very well written the last part turns the earlier parts on their head and...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:49
• Dear Valentine...... (Cheeky Missy) Very well written.
  February 1st, 2011 16:03
• Enigma (Belinda AMeharry) Really very nice and very good.
  February 1st, 2011 16:02
• Your Girl (StormyDay) A really nice poem, truly a love poem!
  January 31st, 2011 15:44
• Cinderella (Emi) You made a very good job of it.
  January 29th, 2011 16:41
• I love to sail.... (Cheeky Missy) Really good poem, is it about kite flying?
  January 29th, 2011 04:36
• Lightning Bugs? (Cheeky Missy) First class poem, absolutely first class.
  January 26th, 2011 15:40
• Star (Belinda AMeharry) Very good poem, very nice.
  January 26th, 2011 15:37
• Goodbye Dear Chalkboard..... (Cheeky Missy) Really very good and lightsome.
  January 22nd, 2011 01:40
• Lonely (Kelly) Very nicely written, though very sad. A good poem, to be lonely is quite...
  January 20th, 2011 15:45
• You Make My Day (Cheeky Missy) Sonnet par excellence!
  January 19th, 2011 15:16
• Cherry Blossoms (StormyDay) Bang on target!
  January 19th, 2011 15:14
• Fire (Ilovecupcakes34) Really good.
  January 18th, 2011 16:07
• Snowscape (Cheeky Missy) Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
  January 18th, 2011 15:58
• Sight (StormyDay) You've done really well on this and seem to have applied a lot of thought...
  January 18th, 2011 15:56
• MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME (Jvl narasimha rao) Absolutely excellent.
  January 18th, 2011 15:52
• Love's Dilemma (Cheeky Missy) Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
  January 17th, 2011 13:05
• WHAT IS REAL BEAUTY? (Jvl narasimha rao) Very well written, I liked it.
  January 14th, 2011 15:54
• The Spider's Web (StormyDay) Another really good Haiku. You must like writing them?
  January 14th, 2011 12:49
• Poor Wittle Birdie? (Cheeky Missy) A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
  January 13th, 2011 14:35
• The Willow Tree (StormyDay) Excellent Haiku.
  January 13th, 2011 14:34
• Dear friend (Lezyl legaspi) A very nice poem, I liked it a good deal.
  January 11th, 2011 12:18
• A ball of fire wrapped around me. (Lifewellspoken) Good words, AMAZING picture.
  January 10th, 2011 15:49
• wathever (Crisnigger) Good poem, well written.
  January 10th, 2011 15:48
• Eyes (Dolphine29) Very true and very well written. Posing the last line of part 3 as a...
  January 10th, 2011 15:47
• Balance (StormyDay) Really well written!
  January 10th, 2011 15:45
• Even then, the sun rises (Dolphine29) Hi there, I've read this poem a few times through today, I like it very...
  January 9th, 2011 12:12
• Existence (Dolphine29) I feel like that sometimes. I think your poem is excellently written and...
  January 8th, 2011 02:57
• WHAT SHOULD A POET WRITE? (Jvl narasimha rao) Well written and very likeable poem.
  January 4th, 2011 14:54
• Transformation (Dolphine29) Your well written poem reminded me of the quote 'Freedom is the expression...
  January 4th, 2011 12:56
• Forgive (Dolphine29) Really good this one. The second last line is very evocative, a really...
  January 2nd, 2011 14:54
• Helpless Musings in a Dark Corner....of the Dungeon (Cheeky Missy) Very well written, as for its sentiments I'm not certain I agree. If you...
  December 30th, 2010 03:30
• Musing Regretfully....in the Dungeon (Cheeky Missy) Well Snowflake this as a piece is exceptionally well written. Are you not...
  December 30th, 2010 03:25
• SEE BEYOND THE UNSEEN (Dolphine29) Really good work. Seems that there could be a few messages contained in...
  December 28th, 2010 12:59
• THE RHYME, MY GREATEST CRIME (Jvl narasimha rao) Good fun that piece
  December 27th, 2010 16:18
• DREAM OF HOPE (Dolphine29) The postive last part especially rounds the poem of well and fits the...
  December 26th, 2010 18:31
• What the Fireball Said..... (Cheeky Missy) Wonderful piece, sign me a book as well! Very glad you have posted it, it...
  December 24th, 2010 03:18
• Dancing....With Love (Cheeky Missy) Absolutely Snowflake, Absolutely! Excellent sonnet.
  December 23rd, 2010 12:12
• Standing on the Cusp...... (Cheeky Missy) Snowflake this piece is absolutely excellent. The way you structure lines...
  December 22nd, 2010 16:14
• Fullest Father Figure (Nair36) I like this poem you've done a good job.
  December 21st, 2010 15:55
• Through the Looking Glass (Pratikshya) Very well written indeed.
  December 21st, 2010 15:52
• Aren't We Having Fun?! (Cheeky Missy) I like this poem a great deal. The 4,4,6,7 makes for a nicely flowing...
  December 21st, 2010 10:29
• Falling in Love with YOU (Cheeky Missy) A well desrved 10 for this one.
  December 20th, 2010 03:50
• I'm Afraid I'm Very Stuck-up.....! (Cheeky Missy) I like this an the way it is presented ending each even numbered line with...
  December 19th, 2010 16:28
• Your Touch (Katrina) Nice poem.
  December 19th, 2010 16:25
• riverside luminance (Ironmaiden_81186) Without any doubt top marks for this. The first line is an excellent line...
  December 19th, 2010 16:23
• O Childhood....whither hast thou fled? (Cheeky Missy) I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our...
  December 18th, 2010 19:04
• What I Loved About You (StormyDay) This, I think, is well written, a nice poem.
  December 17th, 2010 15:33
• back to times of splendor.. (Ironmaiden_81186) I like this poem a great deal. It is well written.
  December 17th, 2010 15:30
• Brothers (Cheeky Missy) Nice poem, what a nice sister they have!
  December 17th, 2010 15:29
• What You Mean To ME (Hoween94) Very well written indeed. A nice poem.
  December 16th, 2010 15:19
• I Don't Like You Anymore (Cheeky Missy) You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
  December 16th, 2010 13:48
• Let Me Be (StormyDay) Nicely done piece.
  December 15th, 2010 13:57
• Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime..... (Cheeky Missy) A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
  December 15th, 2010 13:54
• Beyond These Star (Hayward4591) Excellent poem. I like it.
  December 14th, 2010 16:28
• Two Little Flames....A Fire! (Cheeky Missy) A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
  December 14th, 2010 14:40
• Lament....My Windows are Closed for Winter! (Cheeky Missy) Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.
  December 13th, 2010 16:59
• Broken Heart (Hoween94) Nice piece of free verse poetry.
  December 13th, 2010 16:57
• It Rained Upon a Monday Here (Cheeky Missy) I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
  December 12th, 2010 14:38
• Shifting Sands and Milky Way (Hayward4591) Very well written poem.
  December 12th, 2010 14:36
• Love's Dispare (Hoween94) I think it is well thought out and well written.
  December 11th, 2010 13:28
• Vanity....a lament (Cheeky Missy) It definately deserves to be published in my view.
  December 11th, 2010 13:27
• Our Lives are Spent in Vanity (Cheeky Missy) VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.
  December 10th, 2010 16:35
• The Mirror Never Lies (Hoween94) I like this piece it is cleverly composed.
  December 10th, 2010 13:20
• Repenting Oneself (Cheeky Missy) Very well constructed and clearly a very personal piece. As a poem I like...
  December 9th, 2010 16:20
• A Close Friend (Cheeky Missy) It is a good little poem that says a lot in just a short piece.
  December 7th, 2010 15:32
• Reflections on a Frosty Window (Cheeky Missy) Ten for this without any doubt.
  December 6th, 2010 13:35
• "S" is for....... (Cheeky Missy) Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
  December 4th, 2010 14:35
• I am Like the Weeds, I Guess.... (Cheeky Missy) Good piece, cleverly done.
  December 3rd, 2010 16:30
• Why Should I Smile? (Cheeky Missy) Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
  December 2nd, 2010 17:05
• carpathian fog (Ironmaiden_81186) Excellent imagery.
  December 2nd, 2010 17:01
• Where's Your Smile? (revision) (Cheeky Missy) Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
  December 1st, 2010 14:13
• Where's Your Smile? (Cheeky Missy) I agree.
  November 30th, 2010 17:26
• I'm Not Good Enough for YOU...... (Cheeky Missy) Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better...
  November 29th, 2010 17:31
• I Wish...... (Cheeky Missy) Love it! It's a really tender poem.
  November 28th, 2010 03:29
• Autumn's Promise....Love Won! (Cheeky Missy) Nice one. The imagery is there just as you show it with the picture. P.s...
  November 27th, 2010 12:12
• Entreating His Silence (Cheeky Missy) Like it, I reckon it's not easy to write in this structure but youv'e done...
  November 26th, 2010 16:19
• the wondering (Lollipop23) Good poem, like the imagery.
  November 25th, 2010 17:48
• A War (Anna) Good piece. I like its optimistic nature whilst it does not avoid the...
  November 24th, 2010 16:34
• Sweetheart............. (Cheeky Missy) An absolute ten out of ten.
  November 23rd, 2010 15:19