Comments on community poems by dbremner

• carpathian fog (Ironmaiden_81186) Excellent imagery.
  December 2nd, 2010 17:01
• Where's Your Smile? (revision) (Cheeky Missy) Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
  December 1st, 2010 14:13
• Where's Your Smile? (Cheeky Missy) I agree.
  November 30th, 2010 17:26
• I'm Not Good Enough for YOU...... (Cheeky Missy) Sounds good to me as well. I read it a few of times and liked it better...
  November 29th, 2010 17:31
• I Wish...... (Cheeky Missy) Love it! It's a really tender poem.
  November 28th, 2010 03:29
• Autumn's Promise....Love Won! (Cheeky Missy) Nice one. The imagery is there just as you show it with the picture. P.s...
  November 27th, 2010 12:12
• Entreating His Silence (Cheeky Missy) Like it, I reckon it's not easy to write in this structure but youv'e done...
  November 26th, 2010 16:19
• the wondering (Lollipop23) Good poem, like the imagery.
  November 25th, 2010 17:48
• A War (Anna) Good piece. I like its optimistic nature whilst it does not avoid the...
  November 24th, 2010 16:34
• Sweetheart............. (Cheeky Missy) An absolute ten out of ten.
  November 23rd, 2010 15:19
• Your Nothing Without Me. (Phylock) Good one. Whoever its for wont be able to ignore it
  November 21st, 2010 16:52
• Promise me.....True love? (Cheeky Missy) Good stuff this - I've been there unfortunately (divorce) so I think I...
  November 21st, 2010 13:21
• For Loneliness I Come.... (Cheeky Missy) Now this IS good. You are saying a heck of a lot, delivering a strong...
  November 20th, 2010 12:55
• I've Lost You? (Cheeky Missy) Good poem as well. I had a penpal some years ago that I often think about....
  November 20th, 2010 11:15
• We live for now... (Cheeky Missy) I like this a lot. I like how its structured and I like what it says....
  November 20th, 2010 11:12