A COUPLET (2)

Michael Edwards

As withered leaves that fall from trees

So man, when life’s breath fails, will die.

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 27th, 2018 00:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    But not yet Michael, not yet.
    Good couplet.

  • orchidee

    A true and spiritual write there M.
    Now you've started me singing:
    'We blossom and flourish as leaves on the tree / And wither and perish, but nought changeth Thee'.
    (From hymn: 'Immortal, invisble, God only wise').
    A hymn I hum or sing near river-banks. Go sing it there Orchi, so we won't hear ya! lol.

    • Michael Edwards

      Is a river bank where you launder money?
      Has the river frozen over?
      My screen hasn't frozen over yet today!
      Is it your singing?

      • orchidee

        Yes, strange place to have banks.
        Me singing will oil the wheels of this site - or make it go rusty!

      • Lorna

        But unfortunately he doesn't turn pretty colors before he goes.......

        • Michael Edwards

          You've not seen my legs Lorna lol 🙂

          • Lorna

            You are guaranteed for a laugh Michael......... funny man!

          • orchidee

            You withering...? Bit of ya dropping off? Depends what bits! Swoon!

            • Michael Edwards

              ALL BITS PRESENT AND WORKING BUT SOME OF THEM IN THE WRONG ORDER

            • dusk arising

              All too true, and i hope your eloquent self will provide a fitting epitaph.

              • Michael Edwards

                I'll work on my epitaph dusk - watch this space.

              • Heartwriter

                It's sad when you really think about death. To never see your loved ones again. Thanks Michael glad you are my friend.

                • Michael Edwards

                  Always Kat - I hope we never lose touch.

                  • Heartwriter

                    If you get the time go to my last post. There you will see how far Fern Valley has came. Gonna post the inside tomorrow. It's been a struggle for me Michael. Thanks



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