You have grown
From our faith
Brave enough
To inhale
Take it in
Make a change
You're made of
Everything
It's all ours
To explore
Open an
Inner door
You'll always know
You belong
When you're
In my arms
If I'm not there
Hum a tune
You'll see
Everything
Is in you
Now dream big
Make it true
Happiness
Will follow
You
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thought I'd try and share me playing, not the best sound but after the 5th take I just went with it. I would also like to say thank to everyone on here for helping me be a free-er being than I've ever felt. I'd love to get more people here and stated a fusion that I'd wish could achieve this ( if you have time) freedom too
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Comments7
I love your dreamy strumming Dan.... it's good to "see" you!
Lol I was gutted to see there was no smile but it was shining on the inside and with that comment I'm like the Cheshire Cat
A dreamlike comparison!
Extra thanks on Laura's reply
Dan,
Absolutely beautiful!
The sweet soothing
words and the guitar
accompaniment went
straight to the heart!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
Wow I'm left with goosebumps all over, I feel so blessed to know so many here but with you and Loran it's been like an angel on each shoulder (L&L) love and light.
The words you give are more precious than gold and feed the very essence of my soul.
I hope you have a wonderful day
Thank you, Dan! You’re very generous with your complimentary comments! L&L...I like that!!
I’m here whenever you need that shoulder...my friend!
Super Sunday write
Thank you good sir
May that match your day
Ahh there you are! A fine write and clip Dan.
A some what nervous me
Much appreciated
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle tentative guitar playing accompanied by what sounds like waves and occasional gull calls or was the mike picking up movement acoustics (they sometimes do).
Thank you kindly in getting braver every day with all this support. You are spot on I'm right by the sea and today is a blustery one and the mic on my phone does that, a great ear you have to match that soul.
Much respect my friend
Dan, you always touch my heart in the sweetest way. You shine!
Thank you, it must be taking no sugar in my tea, always was told I'm sweet enough.
Good write, may those dreams come true.
That they are my friend, thank you
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