Eye to eye
Heart to heart
Hand to hand
And yet apart
Alone together
Can't be one
Not meant to be
It can't be done
Lorna, Sentiments to behold! Concise and precise! Sad but beautifully stated! ~Laura~
Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially when a feeling of freedom descends upon us after a failed pairing. Such strong writing from you today.
A fine write Lorna.
Great little write Lorna - love it.
Good write and can be so true. Glad you found the right way.
I remember these moments Wonderfully expressed Keep on dreaming You deserve happiness
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Lorna,
Sentiments to behold!
Concise and precise!
Sad but beautifully stated!
~Laura~
Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially when a feeling of freedom descends upon us after a failed pairing.
Such strong writing from you today.
A fine write Lorna.
Great little write Lorna - love it.
Good write and can be so true. Glad you found the right way.
I remember these moments
Wonderfully expressed
Keep on dreaming
You deserve happiness
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