Invisible

Lorna



I am such a tiny cog

A little puff of smoke

That with some wiggles on a page

Reaches out to folks

 

I do not mind my being small

I do not mind at all

I'd rather be invisible

Than anything at all

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2018 02:58
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 34
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • Goldfinch60

    I too can see you Lorna.

    It amused me to see the ink and quill as I have just come back in with some fresh calligraphy inks.

  • Heartwriter

    I see you too. Nothing wrong with being small. Sometimes that's the best of all!

  • dusk arising

    Small as you wish to be, you reach out big to us readers.
    Why does the fine writer wish invisibility? I know you not, but from words you place here, chinks of you appear. They are not frightening or ugly, and i keep looking.

    • Lorna

      Thanks Dusk - don't take too seriously - it's just something that popped into my head......... replace "invisible" with "peace of mind"..............

    • Michael Edwards

      And so it should be - it's not who you are but what you are - great work Lorna

      • Lorna

        Thanks Michael - don't know about great work - it seemed to mightily upset people.... it was meant lightly..... "all about me!!!!!"..... hate that.

      • Laura🌻

        Lorna,

        Great video with a great message as is your fine “little” penned poem! Enjoyed it!

        ~Laura~

        • Lorna

          Thanks Laura - I'm laughing...... when one walks around the house and doesn't make noise is someone there? If a tree falls in the forest and no one hears, does it fall? Just a lot of nonsense.

          • Laura🌻

            A good lot of nonsense nonetheless!🤗

          • orchidee

            Yes, we see you, and see the fine poem too!

            • Lorna

              I'm hiding behind the palm tree, peeking out and saying "very interesting"....... (remember Laugh In?)

            • Poetic Dan

              Well expressed
              But I'm afraid I see you so much more than this, although happy for you to sit where you wish.

              • Lorna

                https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTm95D3u2-k - No where to run to baby!

                • Poetic Dan

                  Hahaha what a tune with a film that brings lots of memories. That was a wicked little jig, from my head down to my feet even got me off my seat.

                  • Lorna

                    Good now you're All Shook Up: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ATDJ8VPJG5s

                    • Poetic Dan

                      That so funny I took the violin to the beach and I've not picked it up for well over six months and the first one I remember was only fools rush in, so I nervously started and was shocked to hear someone say "that's quite good" I guess you could say I was all shook up! Lol

                      • Lorna

                        I play with the harmonica that way - but never in front of people........ I love the solitary sound..... I pretend I'm a cowgirl keeping the cattle quiet on a summer night........ who needs reality..........



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