Crystal Hope

Life

Precious moments.
Unexpected trials.
Awaiting postponements.
Travelling for miles.

New changes.
Up and down emotions.
High and low ranges.
Channeling over oceans.

Breathless sites.
Rising experiences.
Unsuspected heights.

Vast differences.

 

Comments12

  • Brother_Kane

    Great wordsmithing immediately brings a picture of the vast differences both in scenery and the on going struggle of controlling or dealing with emotions great simile between emotion and nature and how constantly changing both of these subjects are! Can’t wait to read another

    • Crystal Hope

      Thank you. I have SEVERAL poems and will be uploading them soon.

    • Laura

      Crystal,

      Welcome!

      I enjoyed your fine write...
      And you’re so right...
      Ups and downs...
      Highs and lows...
      Welcome them
      with an open mind and
      enjoy the experience
      of it all!

      ~Laura~

    • Reyas

      Really enjoyed this one, I love how you were able to take such a small amount of words but portray a much bigger message, looking forward to reading more.

    • Fay Slimm

      Life as you state in this engaging rhyme is full of "precious moments" if only we register them. Welcome to friendly MPS site Crystal.

    • Goldfinch60

      Those differences in our lives give us the experience to move forward into a finer future.
      Welcome to MPS.

      • Crystal Hope

        Thank you for your comment and your welcome. :)

      • Jon Nakapalau

        This captures powerful feelings of youthful hope - well done!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        WELCOME CRYSTAL ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem . Very elegantly penned ~ four neat quatrains with the same rhyme pattern (abab etc) and rippling with rhythm. That is an excellent structure for a Poem ~ Flowing to recite ! The content reflects the title because that's what LIFE is all about ~ AMEN Precious Moments ~ New Changes ~ Breathless sites & Vast Differences. Being a Christian will help you to cope with all things listed ~ AMEN Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our Poems ~ Thanks B & A ! The way MPS works is we read & comment on each others poems ~ OK

      • Suresh

        At such a young age, such depth
        May all your adventures be pleasant

      • Poetic Dan

        Awesome with a beautiful flow.
        Thank you for sharing

      • Saima

        You literally described everyone’s life within a few words! It’s amazing and meaningful, keep on writing x

      • Blueboy531

        This is really good your writing portraits a picture and is very true I also wrote something similar

      • Theta the scholar

        Brief but sweet and straight to the point, very beautiful poem Hope keep up the good work
        - Theta



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