amateur

onepauly

to move our future

feel free to let it move us

this exchange is our plus

the interaction

is harmony in the making

there is no mistaking

whithin the two

we will know what to do on que

there's more to this then meets the eye

we learn more bye and bye

experimenting with an open mind

is worth the effort

to open up the inner gate

that will eventualy

lead us to our fate

  • Author: onepauly (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2018 04:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: your guess is as good as mine!
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Michael Edwards

    In art I paint both representational work as well as abstract. I don't see poetry being any different. Although this may not have immediate meaning it still carries a punch and is a great play with words (as abstract art is with design and colours. Am I talking sense?

    • onepauly

      always.

    • Goldfinch60

      "experimenting with an open mind

      is worth the effort

      to open up the inner gate

      that will eventualy

      lead us to our fate"

      are very meaningful lines.

      • onepauly

        thank-you very much.
        more poetry to come.
        I just don't know when.
        ill just have to find
        my poetic side.

        • Goldfinch60

          You have already found it.



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