to move our future
feel free to let it move us
this exchange is our plus
the interaction
is harmony in the making
there is no mistaking
whithin the two
we will know what to do on que
there's more to this then meets the eye
we learn more bye and bye
experimenting with an open mind
is worth the effort
to open up the inner gate
that will eventualy
lead us to our fate
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Author:
onepauly (
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In art I paint both representational work as well as abstract. I don't see poetry being any different. Although this may not have immediate meaning it still carries a punch and is a great play with words (as abstract art is with design and colours. Am I talking sense?
always.
"experimenting with an open mind
is worth the effort
to open up the inner gate
that will eventualy
lead us to our fate"
are very meaningful lines.
thank-you very much.
more poetry to come.
I just don't know when.
ill just have to find
my poetic side.
You have already found it.
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