Leap from mountain top
She hoped the sky would catch her
Bloody death stained rocks
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Leap from mountain top
She hoped the sky would catch her
Bloody death stained rocks
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Vivid word-picture of a jump into death which is all too familiar in this day and age - thanks for this excellent haiku Sylvia.
Thanks Faye.
It is world suicide prevention day on 10th September.
Still people fear talking about suicide.
Silence kills 💜
Nothing hopeless here - bit sombre but a great write.
Thank you
We want to steer clear of Miss Sue E. Side! Dunno what the 'E' stands for.
An 'E' book by Eileen Dover
Endless? Eternal?
The book I refer to is called 'Over The Cliff' (by Eileen Dover). Not endless when she reached the bottom.
Sounds like an interesting read. I was suggesting Es for orchidee. I will have to look up the book.
Very good write.
Thanks good evades me in this world
A fine haiku Sylvia. She never gets there, to the bottom of the mountain! is she on a very elastic bungee jump there?! lol.
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