Dreamt Dreams
Expressions
on what dreamt dreams
will circumvent.
Distance
between two becomes
non-existent.
Commitment's
strong hold is therefore
relinquished.
Shed tears
of regret become saltily
finished.
Reasons
for love's grip becomes
un-needed.
Dreams,
once dreamt, ever take
supersedence
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: August 23rd, 2018 04:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Just playing with poetic notions on the power of dreams.
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Comments5
Oh dreams they are a powerful messenger of what we try to hold back
Yes dreams have much mystery Sylvia and certainly are powerful messengers. Thank you for your visit and input - greatly appreciated.
A fine write Fay. A church has 'Dream Interpretations' and 'Peace Treatments'. Could do with that - couldn't we all?!
We sure could dear Orchi - - dreams have much to offer if we could only remember them fully.
Dreams can be so inspiring.
Yes they inspire and carry messages I believer Goldi - - all we have to do is recall the gist of a dream.
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY: Angela here from NZ. Just when I think I got you sussed, you riposte with six elegant triplets on the subject of DREAMS. I love DREAMS. You will always be my Mentor. When I saw the Maori Poi Dancers I dreamt on day I would be one! Now my dream has come true (see my Poem!).
DREAMS
ONCE DREAMT : EVER TAKE
SUPERCEDENCE
Love you : ANGELA XXXX
Hi there in New Zealand my friend - - your comment is so kind and I am humbled you think of my work as your mentor - - Dreams are an intriguing subject on which to write - - but I know with your visit to N.Z. a dream of your own must have come true - you are blessed with the pleasure of country and inhabitants who have welcomed you into their dancing and culture. I loved the read an d video of your beautiful dress etc to take you away in the Maori Poi dancing...... wishing you boundless experiences with the beautiful Maori people.......... hugs to you both and thank you for reading Dreamt Dreams.
Beautiful poem Fay
-Theta
Am pleased you enjoyed the read Theta - thank you so much for visiting and commenting on my efforts to highlight the intriguing aspect of dreams.
of course Fay anytime
-Theta
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