Blue Autumn

ron parrish aka wordman

Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .

Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back

I reminess

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky

Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

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Fay Slimm. August 29th, 2018 13:29
Such a poignant feel to this read Ron - you have a way with romantic words which touches the heart - sad but beautifully written.
- ron parrish aka wordmanAugust 29th, 2018 13:43
  thank you fay
orchidee August 29th, 2018 13:36
A fine write Ron.
- ron parrish aka wordmanAugust 29th, 2018 13:45
  thank you
Laura🌻 August 29th, 2018 18:13
Ron,

A beautiful write for a sad ending!
I enjoyed the clip!

~Laura~
- ron parrish aka wordmanAugust 29th, 2018 19:14
  glad you liked it,thanks
Michael Edwards August 29th, 2018 23:47
Sad but a great read Ron.
- ron parrish aka wordmanAugust 30th, 2018 18:27
  thanks michael
Goldfinch60 August 30th, 2018 00:24
Sad emotive write, Super write though Ron.
- ron parrish aka wordmanAugust 30th, 2018 18:27
  thank`s andy

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