The trust you ask of me
I will ask back of you
In the middle we find harmony
If it's truly our inner motive
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'm so beautiful human and I'm proud it. The only one way is our own way. If it spreads light then you're doing it right.
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If only everybody met there - great little 'un.
They would see the art in everything lol
And yet, in wisdom we surely gain something. We may or may not lose something in it too.
The pic may be someone who has an 'Eastern 'religion. I'm not into the 'emptying the mind' aspects myself, though your poem is not on that theme!
I guess you could say you gain space by letting something go but something new will fill that space back up. It is impossible for vibrational beings to be empty, nothing ever stops.
Always appreciate your words
Much love and respect
In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
Very true my friend, the brave and bold can still fear the cold.
So very true Dan, harmony can be found in so many ways.
Dan lovely - you are channeling Rumi:
"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about."
Rumi
See Open Secret: Versions of Rumi with translations by Coleman
Oooo I got goosebumps all over reading that.. Thank you for laying in that grass from some else's words, to stop and hear all our hearts beat the same.
Thank you being so perfectly you
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