WAITING FOR SEPTA

fuche_bu

waiting for Septa

on a too warm summer day

little breeze to cool

  • Author: fuche_bu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2018 11:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: I spend entirely too much of my time waiting for Septa trains so I figured I would commemorate the experience.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 18
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  • The Gifted One

    A very nice Haiku. I noticed the word Septa, which is in the east coast.

    The Gifted One

    • fuche_bu

      thanks for reading. I'm a Philly boy and septa is our transit system.

    • Michael Edwards

      Neat - super piece.

      • fuche_bu

        thank you

      • Goldfinch60

        I am glad there was a cooling breeze for you. Good haiku.

        • fuche_bu

          You need the breeze when waiting for septa. thank you for reading



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