Blue Silence

Lorna



Blue flower in the vase

Sitting in the silence

Water is gone

But still the color carries on

Speaking to the quiet

Its blue flower words

As it fades away

And leaves the space

More silent that before

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2018 08:35
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • kevin browne

    So Gentile, smooth and a relaxing little thought out poem. Quite beautiful, Lorna.

    • Lorna

      So glad you liked Kevin!

      • kevin browne

        Always welcome, Lorna.

      • Laura🌻

        Lorna,

        You’ve written a gem! You’ve penned the most beautiful, meaningful poem with so much intended meaning...metaphorically stunning!
        Love the pic...
        and the song is one of my favorites!
        You’ve assembled a great 🎁 with ❤️!

        ~Laura~

        • Lorna

          Hi L...... I'm putting myself to work again...... thank you as always for your encouragement! Love ya!

          • Laura🌻

            Right back at you, my dear friend! ❤️

          • Michael Edwards

            We dry a bunch of hydrangeas every year - the colours are fantastic. And so is this gem of a write dear Lorna

            • Lorna

              If only I could figure out how to make them produce flowers at the TOP instead of the bottom of the plant!

              • Michael Edwards

                Turn them upside down 🙂 🙂 🙂

                • Lorna

                  That's so Alice in Wonderland........ off with their heads (literally)..........

                • orchidee

                  A fine write Lorna.

                • onepauly

                  excellent!
                  it is very meaningful.
                  I have two cd's from
                  simon and garfunkle.
                  and when they play that song
                  I feel mellow.


                  • Lorna

                    Thanks Pauly.... it's a great one isn't it..... I also like Scarborough Fair.......

                    • onepauly

                      sure! I have all their hits.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Beautiful write Lorna, the fading of flowers can be so wonderful.

                      The Sound of Silence, and all of Simon and Garfunkel's recordings, is great. It is one of the numbers that is sung in the Community Choir of which I am a founder member.

                      • Lorna

                        Thanks Andy! Would you ever post videos of your choir singing?

                      • MaggieF

                        Lorna, your poem reinforces mindfulness, being in the moment, it will make me look more closely at my own flowers. Beautiful. Maggie

                        • Lorna

                          Thanks Maggie........



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