harmony revealed

dusk arising

 

 

Give to me

the peace of quiet woodland

where nature opens up her heart

in harmony revealed

i am healed

 

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 14th, 2018 00:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Fay's writing yesterday.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    I love short punchy pieces and this is a great example - super work dusk

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good write and so true. There is nothing quite as healing as communing with nature.

    • dusk arising

      I know you know this to be true, so alike you and your river

    • orchidee

      A lovely write and pic dusk. Unfortunately, I didn't get the hang of it. It didn't heal me. I went in some woods and walked into a tree. It would have helped if I had not closed my eyes in meditation at the time, while walking. doh!

      • dusk arising

        Those tiny 4 legged critters in your picture would be able to lead you thru the forest dodging trees and nasties.

        • orchidee

          Ohh yes, they know the way!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace can heal us. Great read.

          • dusk arising

            Thank you for the inspiration Fay. One day i'll get to the forest and sit peacefully.

          • HangingbyaHalo

            I love this and long for it.

            • dusk arising

              One day i will find the right tree to hug, the right woodland to meditate within and i know my troubles will ease.
              Thank you for reading and commenting.

            • Neville

              there is certainly something very therapeutic about the countryside.. a nice little thought expressed in a poem...



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