OCEANS TEARS

Michael Edwards

 

 

OCEANS TEARS

 

In avenues where trees stand ranked

she breathes a lonely ponderous sigh

as church bells strike the midnight hour

beneath an unknown sky.

 

Carpeted on poisoned growth

she lays below the branching limbs

her body clad in mist and rain

insensate to  the fingering winds.

 

With thoughts of unknown pedigree

in memories eidetic clutch

tormented by passivity

she sheds an oceans tears.

 

 

Michael Edwards © September 2018

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 17th, 2018 00:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderfully emotive write Michael.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Andy - just spotted it should read 'sheds' in the last line - will correct it now.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I'm gonna be eidetic today! Any relation to Ida Tick?

      • Michael Edwards

        I'm friends with her brother Roman.

        • orchidee

          Or is it pronounced as Mr I. Dettic? is his first name Ian?

          • Michael Edwards

            Could be Ivan

            • orchidee

              You seen Bill Posters, or his friend Bill Stickers? They prosecuted them yet? Are they in jail? And what have they done? Why will they be prosecuted?! So many questions....

            • dusk arising

              I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much like my fog.

              • Michael Edwards

                May your fog soon disperse - thanks for your comments dusk

              • Fay Slimm.

                Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the nuances behind these lines - another gem Michael.

                • Michael Edwards

                  Thank you Fay - - may I repeat your comments in respect of your own fine work posted today.r

                • Laura🌻

                  Michael,

                  Wow...this write is incredible!
                  I totally agree with Fay’s comment!
                  An amazing read indeed!

                  Love your art piece with the added touch of the clothes line!

                  ~Laura~

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Aw thank you Laura - I'm not always quite this inspired - that's why I post so many lighter pieces.



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