onepauly

preponderance

after having six beers

sit i here in tears

a broken old man

from times of yore

ill do what i can

with the lore

lonely am i from days past

my loved ones ill find

ill be with them at last

follow that road

like in kind

i know ill not be 

left behind

Comments4

  • Goldfinch60

    Those old friends will still be with you as you remember them through your life.

    • onepauly

      thanks gf.
      thank you for your comment.

    • Fay Slimm.

      A well rhymed lament on the loss of old friends - it goes with the flow of life to its end Pauly - - thanks for sharing it.

      • onepauly

        you are welcome, fay

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        1Paul,

        enjoyed the tempo & structure of this sad emotional piece.

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        • onepauly

          thanks, from onepauly.
          one in all things.

        • Michael Edwards

          One of the dilemmas we face as we grow older - fine work.

          • onepauly

            sad isn't it.
            not crocodile tears.



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