with me its us not i
but the captain at the helm
will surely try
not to overwhelm
it takes courage and perservering
not what you heard overhearing
all of us are loners alright
looking for some kind of insight
and from that which we claim
is not others that we blame
for our misgivings
because we are all the same
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Author:
onepauly (
Offline) - Published: September 19th, 2018 03:00
- Comment from author about the poem: shucks its nothing. enjoy.
- Category: Love
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Comments5
A fine write Pauly.
I thank-you orch
You hit the nail perfectly with your wording of this poem. Don't give up on the loneliness of life because if you search deep enough the fruits of togetherness will bring us back together, Good write, onepauly.
we all need a friend.
Hahhhhh, you got me there good fellow, yes you did.
Okay. Let's talk about it.
Yes. You're right. We are all the same. I can't deny it. Human nature can be compared to color. Blue is in many ways different from pink, but it is still a color. So yeah, you're right.
And I see what you did there, don't think I don't. It is indeed true that people will try their best to say that a certain demographic is responsible for this, or that: But we all play a vital part in the song.
In the end, It's true.
We're all lonely people looking for insight.
Whether it's pink,
Or sky blue.
Nice one sir. Pulled a fast one on us.
looks like you took the bait.
ha! ha! ha! thank you.
We are all the same yet different - not sure I can get my head round this - errr....!
don't take it to seriously
its only poetry.
Very good write, we each have our own ways but we are always better when we come together in agreement.
how right you are.
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