As the autumn leaves whirl around
I sit quietly listening to the sound
And look outside, struck by what I've found
The beauty that surrounds
Now fall is not my favorite time of year
Christmas is, and for good cheer
I get to spoil my kids, and my dear
And love abounds
I love my husband and he loves me
There's no arguing, we live happily
I'm awestruck everyday by what i feel and see
Like his queen I was crowned
so as I'm faced with autumn and the cold
I'll surround myself with love and beauty untold
I have my love and he has me to hold
As the leaves fall all around
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Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Christina,
What a beautiful poem! May your love always make the world go ‘round!
A super read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura! I appreciate the read and the kind words!
GOOD MORNING CHRIS ~Thanks for a PERFECT Poem with a very POSITIVE tone. I love the Rhyme pattern:
aaaa bbba ccca ddda Makes the Poem a delight to both read & recite ! I love it when your POEM counts your BLESSINGS ~ God sent you the RIGHT MAN 16 years ago and me the RIGHT LADY ~ GOD is GOOD. BEING a NURSE you will enjoy ANGELAS poem on VITAMINS & Healthy Living ~ Mine tomorrow is on MINERALS. Every Blessing ABRAZOS y BESOS ~ Tu Hermano en El Spirito BRIAN @@@@@@@
Thanks so much for such a positive reply! I appreciate it! Christina
Love of family must come first but my favourite time of the year is autumn.
It was two degrees C this morning , the sun was shining and I went out to get the daily paper and I walked the long way round, it was marvellous.
Glad to hear! Beautiful day here as well! Thanks for your wonderful comment!
A fine write Christina.
thanks so much Steve!!
Beautiful and very catchy, it rolls so easily off the tongue, like autumn leaves gliding on a crisp fresh breeze.
I do appreciate your kind words, Gogeta!
This is a very nice piece with very nice use of words.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
Thank you, appreciated!
Christina, you've included such a lovely message, "love," in your poem about the leaves of Autumn, Sounds like you have a very happy life and family. Just keep smiling and writing.
Well done! 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it!
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