Goldfinch60

Life's Ocean.



I sail through life’s vast ocean,

On a boat of impossible dreams.

Journeying from the wonder of my past,

Into the glory of my future.

The ocean challenged me

With its rough seas,

But my dreams conquered them all.

Sailing through My Life

The smoothness was also there,

As my dreams floated from the ocean,

Through My Soul,

Into my future,

That future full of dreams,

Which will sail with me,

On life’s vast ocean.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 26th, 2018 01:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just dreaming.
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    I'm with you on the same cruise - fine work Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, meet you in the restaurant.

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold. You gone sailing? You must be going to the 1066 reunion.

      • Goldfinch60

        Of course I am. see you there.

      • dusk arising

        There's a part of you desires shipwreck i'll bet.
        Nice mind romancing piece.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you da.

          Sorry, shipwrecks are not an option.

        • MissileOfUncertainty

          This is a beautiful metaphor. Honestly, I was in awe. Thank you for sharing.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you MOU, your words are so kind.

          • w c

            I've sailed at times. There sometimes across a rough and challenging sea.

            Nice write, G.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you w c, those rough seas can always be conquered.



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