dusk arising

silent night

 

smiling with the butterflies
laughter enlights her cobalt eyes     
glance ecstasy personified
in barefoot dancing pale levi's

.       as outside silent night sweeps by
.       in duvet slumbers dreams i lie
.       where years desires carefree fly
.           till dawning's kiss
.                    of sweet goodbye

each motion making mockery
a passion hence denied in me
till lovers final harmony
enraged my thundering timpani


.        as outside silent night sweeps by
.        quiet calls a stifled cry
.        memory time cannot deny
.              of dawnings kiss
.                      and last goodbye

Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful emotive write.

  • orchidee

    A fine write dusk.

    • dusk arising

      Thanks for reading Orchidee

    • Michael Edwards

      Reads so well - great work dusk

      • dusk arising

        Thank you ME. Appreciated.

      • kevin browne

        Perfection on a piece of paper. I'm quite taken aback from the beauty in it from the first word till the last.

        • dusk arising

          Thats high praise and i thank you.

        • Christina8

          What a stunning poem! Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it!

          • dusk arising

            Thank you Christina. I think it must have overpowered some, it appears 24 people viewed it but only 5 have commented.
            Definately heartfelt you are right there. All the stuff of dreams is from our hearts after all.

          • ron parrish aka wordman

            i enjoyed the write

          • Santita

            This is magical. Loaded with beautiful imagery and striking emotion. I feel the longing in this as if it were my own. Very dreamy write!

          • marijoy

            Nostalgic, emotional from the beginning to the end. Enjoyed the reading.



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