The Retired Bloke


I am

Or am I?

I live 

Or do I?

I try 

But really?

I see

Very clearly?

I hear

But listen?

I give


I take

Too regularly?

I err

Too frequently?

I love


I cry


I learn

Too occasionally?

I forget 


I am

Without question!



  • Michael Edwards

    It's in the genes - we're not related are we? Love it - gave me a big bedtime smile.

  • Goldfinch60

    We all have these questions about ourselves and come up with the same answers but we are each unique. You are you I and I am me.

  • orchidee

    A fine write RB. Erm, I got a problem myself - am I Me, Myself, or I? That's three people! heehee.

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