I sit here on top of the hill
Looking back I see my life,
See my life behind me.
The path that I strode showed the way,
The way that I came to this place.
There were hills,
There were mountains,
Where the problems,
Problems in my life stalled,
Stalled my trip.
There were diversions,
Diversions that led me away,
Away from the path.
Some showed sadness,
But most diverted into glory.
Each hill, mountain and diversion
Were overcome,
Until at last I was here,
Here at the top of my hill.
I looked forward and saw it,
Saw the long smooth path,
The path that I would take,
Take with My Spirit to infinity,
Where the problems of my past
Would be forgotten,
As I move forward in Glory,
In Glory,
In Wonderment,
And with Love,
Always with Love.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 19th, 2018 01:38
- Comment from author about the poem: The Bach is for you all but especially for Unsub as it goes from dark to light.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 14
Comments5
A fine write Gold. Fido will go into over-drive soon, on his mission stamping out Halloween - darkness, ghoulies, ghosties, etc.
It's some people styles to write in dark genre though, and can produce fine poems. I can't stamp it all out anyway. Woof! Not now, Fido!
No not this time Fido. Bach is one of the untouchables.
Great piece written with passion.
Thank you Michael, the passion for life and beyond is certainly always with me.
Wonderful poem Andy! Written with great emotion.
Thank you Christina, most kind.
This write is an exercise in spiritual inspiration. It's good to know you have confidence in the words of our Lord. 🙂
Thank you Tamara, I know that My Spirit will go on for eternity.
I love the poems you write your choice of words very expressive have confidence In what you write because you write poetry so well
Kind regards Johnny
You are so kind Johnny, I write what I feel and about what I see, it is the world in which I can get lost.
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