Freedom Flight

orchidee



Tune: Little Cornard

('Hills of the north, rejoice')

*******

Fly free, birds, spread your wings

Fly high over all things

All the sky you have clear

You view all below here

Yes, wing your flight so graciously

The Lord He your Creator be

 

Swooping and gliding strong

Borne on the winds along

Nothing impair your way

Flying at night or day

So souls released from sins may fly

Through Christ they know they never die

 

Begone, accusation

And too condemnation

That seek to your wings bind

So you no freedom find

But mourn and coo like doves entrapped

In fears and turmoils all enwrapped

 

Yet freedom through the One

Jesus the Father's Son

Washed by His blood, we free

He died even for me

And rose again that all may live

Eternal life He does us give

 

Wing your passage soul, be

Released from your cage, see

Free in Christ to be you

He does make all things new

Ascend on high, not earth bound stay

Christ here for you, He is the Way

 

We could not ourselves free

But Christ redemptively

Came to our help and aid

Our sins price He has paid

That we full in His image grow

And more of His power may know

 

 

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 20th, 2018 01:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 666688 metre, written after seeing a kite (bird) flying high. I'm still unsure what speed this should be played/sung. it seems garbled if sung too fast.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 29
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    Great work Orchi

    • orchidee

      Thanks Michael. Why is it those hills of the north? Where are they? Did the writer mean north UK - Scotland? I'm not that knowledgeable about hymn-writers history.

    • Goldfinch60

      Super write Orchi. I will be flying with the birds.

      • orchidee

        Thanks Gold. Yep, let's fly, not in dashing around and hurrying everything, but flying with the birds.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you

        • orchidee

          Thanks Dan. I suppose there are some sort of 'vibes' in this, if you wish - 'fly free', etc?

        • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

          The Lord would be proud of you because your words honor Him continuously.

          Thanks for posting. 🙂

        • dusk arising

          "Came to our help and aid" er...where exactly did that happen?
          Flows nicely.

          • orchidee

            Thanks dusk. Well, came to our aid as the verse says - to redeem us, to save us, by dying on the cross for us. I have to mention 'save us from our sins'. We have to realise our need. But if we say we don't sin, and are not sinners, then we can't see any need why a guy should die on a cross (then rise again) about 2,0000 years ago for us. Sort of 'you need not have done that, mate'.

            • dusk arising

              what have i been redeemed from? or saved from?

              • orchidee

                Thanks dusk. We have all sinned, since Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit (apple, or whatever it was). God has to be just and holy, as well as loving. Jesus His Son takes our place as an acceptable offering and sacrifice to God His Father, to pay the price for our sins to be forgiven, i.e. redeems us, saves us. Otherwise it would be futile - why would one die, give up one's life, for no purpose?

                • dusk arising

                  You didn't answer the question you just gave me a lot of something else. Look,if i pull a kid out of the road, i saved him from being hit by a car/bus. If i pull him out of the canal, i saved him from drowning.
                  So what peril have i been saved from... ???? Surely it is a valid question.

                  • orchidee

                    Well - saved from our sins - if we have trusted Jesus as our Saviour. Saved from eternal separation from God, which is sadly our unredeemed (unsaved) state.

                    • dusk arising

                      But according to what you wrote above, "we have all sinned" (your words) so looks like we haven't been "saved from our sins" (your words) at all. So it's all a waste of time.
                      If we look at the proposition that we had not been saved from our sins, then what would befall us?
                      Sin is a man made concept. Animals don't sin. Mankind is just another animal.



                    To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.