Aching inside
Secret places on fire
My cheeks start to flush
As I feel wrong with desire
Longing and needing
A pleading within
A heat that is burning
I lose as I win
I breathe as I rise
I gasp as I fall
Inevitable sensations
I submit to them all
Aching inside
Secret places on fire
My body left shaken
Taken: Oh fleeting desire!
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sylviasearcher (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It's metaphorical but better 18+ it
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Glad you've 18+ed it - or Orchi would sent Fido after you - super work nonetheless
Thanks Michael.
It was just a fleeting whim that compelled a few words.
Hot stuff Sylvia...........
😳
Very good understated sensual write Sylvia.
You know it was about enjoying tea and biscuits right?
A smouldering write on inner desire - - gentle erotica wrapped in excellent imagery Sylvia. Great read.
Thanks Fay
Interesting......
Interesting good or bad?
I mean no poem is bad so interesting good
To be honest, and I always try to be honest, the only bad thing here is the fact that whatever it might be, is only fleeting.. oh' and that little bit of unnecessary guilt you allude to... maybe we need to slow down a touch.. .lovely little bit o poetry though... Neville
Oh indeed if only my brain would slow down!
Of all my poems the fact you chose this one to read.... 😳
you are entitled to feel more than fleetingly very proud of these words.... Neville 🙂
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