First
It
Becomes
Set in words
Emerging on the page
Questioning the writers language
Using words as traps
Enchants you
Now you
Can’t
End
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: At the Poetry Group which I organise tomorrow the subject is "Acrostic Day". As a foretaste of the one I am going to put up tomorrow this is an Acrostic that I have written using a a FIB sequence. A FIB is a fibonacci sequence using the total number of syllables from the last two lines in the current line i.e - 1,1,2,3,5,8. In this poem I have reversed it as well. Tomorrow I will put up another Acrostic.
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A fine write Gold. Is it worth me trying the bi-monthly local poets group again? Dunno if it's still going, but may meet this evening (last Tues of month bi-monthly).
It's rather a muttering and mumbling though. I mutter too. doh!
Lets waffle - FIBS of 13, 21, 34, 65, 99..... - words per line? When to stop?!
Go and surprise them Orchi.
I have manged to get to thirteen words in one of my FIBS in the past.
We could vary it, e.g. number of syllables per stanza.
Great form and a good example - you'll impress them with this Andy.
Andy,
I totally agree with Michael’s comment!
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When I first saw the title of your poem, I thought I was going to read a sequence of lies written in acrostic form! LOL
Silly me!
I enjoyed the video! I learned something new! Thank you for sharing!
My love to Joyce and you!
~Laura~
NICE ONE ANDY ~ Now you are Centre Staging ! A REVERSE FIBONACCI ACROSTIC (Swoon) I thought I was bad enough with my RHYMING ACROSTIC SONNETS etc ~ Well done you have won 2018 MPS Poetry Prize ! MIKE & I will have to go back to the Drawing Board ! Love the Music & the Poem ~ Im going to lie down in a dark room ! Love & Blessings for You & JOYCE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
HI ANDY ~ Could yo please check our FUSION ~ FAVOURITE CHRISTMAS SONGS / CAROLS ? The Video changes to accommodate each new contributor ! The current one is Pavarotti Singing "You Came from the Stars" in Italian. Angela has also posted a picture of the 2018 New Zealand Nativity Stamps ~ Not to be missed ! Yours BRIAN
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