Veronica (Villanelle)
While I stood in the midst that final day
and held a handkerchief of linen white,
His form moved past me as I knelt to pray.
Daylight was masked by ebony and grey
and yet I kept His movement in my sight,
while I stood in the midst that final day.
His garments, torn and tattered, soiled and frayed,
hung loosely, He appeared devoid of fright,
His form moved past me as I knelt to pray.
Cries of lament were heard; yet, none would say,
He was the Christ, our Savior, and the Light,
while I stood in the midst that final day.
Though obstacles were cast into His way,
He trudged along the path; refused to fight,
His form moved past me as I knelt to pray.
I moved to wipe His brow without delay,
His imprint cast forever, sanguine bright.
While I stood in the midst that final day,
His form moved past me as I knelt to pray.
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Author:
Tamara Beryl Latham (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The final walk to the cross.
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This is Beautiful Sister TAMARA : So beautiful it made me cry ! Because as a Child I was raised as a Catholic : I immediately recognised it as the 6th Station of the Cross where Veronica wipes he Brow of Jesus with a cloth and is pushed back by the Roman Soldiers. Because of the poignant Subject of the poem : the Villanelle is an excellent Structure because of the repetition of key lines (1 & 3) in verse One. Each verse gives an insight into the suffering of Our Saviour as he journeyed to his Atoning Crucifixion : AMEN
Why did they nail Him to Calvary's Tree
Why tell me why was he there ?
JESUS the Helper : The Healer : the Friend
Why tell me me why should he care ?
All my iniquity on Him was laid
He bore it all to the Tree
JESUS the Price of My Sin fully piad
HE bore the Ransom for ME ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring & sharing
LOVE in the SPIRIT
Sister ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thank you so much Angela. I'm glad you both understood and enjoyed the repeating lines, as it pertained to our Savior, in this villanelle.
I certainly appreciate your feedback. 🙂
I'm not a Christian Tamara but I still recognise the beauty in this superb example of an elegant classical form. .
Wonderful write Tamara and the excellent form of words.
Thank you Goldfinch60. I appreciate your input. 🙂
A poignant write Tamara. Thoughtful too, in getting the rhymings.
Similar to Mary anointing Him for burial. Then men helping too, e.g. Nicodemus and Joseph tending to His burial.
Yes, orchidee, what you have expressed was certainly true. I sincerely believe we are not too far from His entering through the Golden Gate (Jerusalem). What a day that will be! 🙂
Thanks Tamara. Phew! I'm reading a theology book. Now, are Christians taken to the Rapture before the Tribulation (pre-tribulationist - yes, the author says); during it (mid-tribulationist); or after it (post-tribulationist)? I got enough tribulation just saying the words! heehee.
Yes, orchidee, the tribulation is a bit confusing. I just think of the words Jesus declared "Be prepared." With that, how can we go wrong?
I got bit of headache now, trying to unravel all the author's Tribulation stuff. Well, he did base part of it on a Th.D. I'm no Doctor of Theology, but I'll need a doc for me headache. lol. When it happens, we'll know, so.... to be prepared, as you remind us Jesus said.
Hope you're feeling better. Do you have high blood pressure? Garlic, vinegar or hibiscus tea lowers blood pressure. When my pressure is high I get a headache.
It's me mucking about, but too much heavy studying could bring on a headache!.heehee.
Well, you've got to lighten up on your studying. Jesus will forgive you, I feel certain, especially if studying has a devastating effect on your health. 🙂
It's me mucking about really, along with saying I'm always on the sherry, and eating pork pies, and other eccentric things that I say I do!.
Beautiful write Tamara and the Sixth Station of the Cross that we try to pray on Friday in the Catholic world.
Thank you, Gary. I appreciate your feedback. I'm elated you liked it. 🙂
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