Come a little closer then you’ll see
Theta was here looking in a mirror, criticizing himself not knowing everything else from the other side of the looking glass everyone is different for better and for worse.
- Winter howls as it comes closer and closer
As the winds blow and softly scrapes your shoulder
- Tis the season to be happy, thankful and jolly
Surrounded by people and decorations celebrating the Holly
- But all that glitters isn’t gold
We don’t need gifts just someone to hold
- Also things aren’t always as they seem
Some people are stuck in nightmares while others in dreams
- So please give someone a gift whether big or small
Show people the meaning of decking the halls
- For everyone needs love no matter the size
Being mean is easy instead give a smile big and wide
- For being materialistic is shallow and extremely bold
For their type of happiness is not real like fools gold
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Good morning everyone have a wonderful day and or evening. As always feedback is awesome and welcomed. - Theta friendly neighborhood scholar. PS: Do you guys want to do a Christmas poem or maybe even a fusion poem open to all??? Let me know.
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Comments3
A clever construct - in fact I can see two poems here - one in bold and one in lower case. Great write Theta
Very observant Micheal thank you for the generous words.
The theme of the verse gives a good reason to work against materialism and I agree wholeheartedly in the worthless value of "fools gold" and that "everyone needs love" to find happiness - a fine write my friend.
Thank you for the generous words Fay
Clever write Theta.
When our children or grandchildren ask what I would like for Christmas I always reply "Your time", time is the most precious thing that anybody can give to another.
Very true
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