BRIAN & I : We love to explore
UP & DOWN steps in Pastures new
Venturing through a PRIVATE DOOR
For to explore : enjoy the view !
UP & DOWN steps in Pastures new
Lost in FRANCE or rural PENZANCE
For to explore : enjoy the view
Footsteps for US are a Game of Chance !
Lost in FRANCE or rural PENZANCE
Reading a MAP that*s upside down
Footsteps for US are a Game of Chance
In a New Village : In a New Town !
Reading a MAP that*s upside down
Makes US go LEFT when WE should go RIGHT
In a New Village : In a New Town
Arrive at the INN in the Dead of Night !
Make US go LEFT when we should go RIGHT
Venturing through a PRIVATE DOOR
Arrive at the INN in the Dead of Night
BRIAN & I : We love to explore !
Thanks for visiting : comments welcome : Love A & B 🧡🧡🧡
A PANTOUM is a classical poetic form ~ in which each line
is repeated systematically once only ! Lines 2 & 4 in Verse
One become Lines 1 & 3 (Lines 2 & 4 are new) in Verse Two.
This process is continued until the Final Verse. You decide how
many verses you want ~ in the above case FIVE. In the case of
the Final Verse ~ Lines 2 & 4 of the Penultimate Verse are Lines
3 & 1 of Verse One ! In this way every line is repeated TWICE and
the First & Last line of the PANTOUM are identical. Strangely it
really does work in practice ! Why not try one for Yourself ? !
ANGELA ES MUY BONITA ~ COMO UNA ROSA ROJA !
WHEN I was courting ANGELA
I always brought Her Red Roses
HER PADRE (A Spanish Wine Merchant) say
Better to bring her VINO RIOJA TINTO !
HER MADRE say ROSAS mejor por Senorita Bonita !
I always take Snr PEDRO a Cigar
I always take Snra MARIA chocolates !
PEDRO y MARIA love me ~ which is good
ANGELA also Loves me ~ which is better !
Every FRIDAY night ~ ANGEL stayed @ my Flat
MAMA y PAPA (Catolicos) are very happy ~ because
We promise NO BAMBINOS before MARRIAGE !
When I was courting LA BELLA ANGELA
I always brought her ROSAS ROJAS por AMOR !
Thanks for visit ~ Comments Welcome ~ Love BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡
In Spanish Culture ~ before you WOO a Senorita
You must first WOO her Parents ! Love BRIAN 🧡🧡
This POEM is presented as a FREE VERSE 5 7 2 Sonnet !
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ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
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Good write. It is always best to get the parents on side. Her Father has good taste if he suggested Rioja as a gift, it is my favourite wine.
thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ Just checking MPS in my Lunch Hour ! When I was Young I often knew the Parents of the ladies I courted ! I have always felt it was important because in ESSENCE you marry the Family. I had much to recommend me to Angela's Padre y Madre ! I spoke Spanish ~ Played an Acoustic Guitar ~ I love Spain and had visited several times including SEVILLA ~ Pedro y Maria's Home Town. They trusted me with their Beautiful Daughter. Don Pedro is a distributor of RIOJA in the UK ! Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN.
Blessings & Love to You & Joyce 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
A fine write B&A!
Gracias TIO STEVE ~ Pleased you liked it. I wanted the THREE ELEMENTS ~ Poem ~ Pic & Pitch to present a composite Picture of Spain and the sheer Elegance & Beauty of a Senorita Exceptional ~ like ANGELA !
Please check our new Fusion on DATES !
Love & Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Very nice trio indeed! Very nice poem for your love.
HOLA CHRISTINA ~ GRACIAS pot tu commento ~ como estas ? Pleased you like the symbiosis of the three elements ! Don Pedro y Sra Maria really love me because I ticked all the boxes ! A genuine Love for ANGELA ~ A great love for Andalucia & Flamenco ~ Good Spanish ~ a Classical / Folk Guitarist & a lover of Spanish Cuisine & Wine ~ AMEN. In her 20's ANGELA had had some unsatisfactory Suitors and Maria said "YO FUI ENVIADO DE DIOS EN CIELO !" So I can do no wrong. They were HAPPY for Angela to stay with me on a Friday Night and they trust me not to get her pregnant before we are married. While ANGELA is in NZ ~ I go to them for a Meal every Friday Night ! They are devout Catholics but are happy for Angela to be married in the Evangelical Church ~ We attend. We will go to Sevilla for our Honeymoon and will have a Blessing in the Cathedral ~ where Pedro & Maria were married ! AMEN. Hope to have a CHRISTINA 8 Poem ~ Please check our FUSIONS ~ Besos y Abrazos y Amor de Tus Hermanos en El Spirito Sancto ~
BRIAN y ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Great write and I love the last line.
GRACIAS UNCLE MIKE ~ Pleased you liked it ! As you know I like to get a symbiosis of POEM ~ Pic & Pulsating Music ~ Nice Trio ! Pedro & Maria treat me like an HIJO especially as ANGELA is in NZ ! Yours as always BRIAN.
How wholesome an beautiful poem. I chuckled at "no bambinos before marriage". Keep up the splendid work dear friend
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