On Waking

Neville

On Waking

 

Once upon awakening

yet

before the first kiss of dawn

both her retina’s

caressed and blinking

pastel strobe effects are born

Then his poem swiftly read before

She took her breakfast

On the lawn

Partly ritual and now

Part her famous repartee…

 

Only moments later tho

Her palms went searching

and so very

very desperately

For that place she thought

his shadow slept

It was then no less

he realised

That he wanted to be forever

in her depths and debt…

 

Twas also then he noticed

broken leather sandal strap

and discarded robe so very

full of the scent Patchouli

Ah’ yes both arms were

stretched about her head and

legs well kissed and wet with

sweet dew from somewhere set

A golden triangle beckoned…

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 14th, 2018 00:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: any and all interpretations welcome, who knows, you might well have a better one...
  • Category: Erotic
  • Views: 36
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Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    Well I have my interpretation - based, thankfully, on a long memory. Much enjoyed - thanks for posting - I will return to it later.

    • Neville

      thank you, I take it that's a yes then

      • Michael Edwards

        Err - yes.

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.

        • Neville

          I feel most precariously balanced here on this pedestal, but whilst up here, please accept my very sincere thank you's... N

        • orchidee

          It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must 'get out more' as they say.

          • Neville

            you really must

            • orchidee

              I will get my coat, get out more, let my hair down, have a less sheltered life, all that stuff....!

            • 2 more comments

            • Fay Slimm.

              Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.

              • Neville

                if I helped you to achieve a few of those memories, then I am well and truly made up.. 🙂 N

              • Fay Slimm.

                Another dunk into the scented draw of an early morning bare tease stripping to show her repartee. Grrrreat read this............... x

                • Neville

                  thank you again dear Fay.... x



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